Pretend You're Someone Else

Hmm... It feels like you are flashing me a still picture. It is intriguing, but I don't really understand what is happening. I know there is a decision that needs to be made but I'm not sure what that decision is for. I'm not sure if they they already know who the girl is or will find out. I also want to know what the secret is. So in short, I need to read the next chapter.

OMY!! i really shouldnt have started... now u do realize, i'm gonna be bugging you.. Please please post soon.. so so many questions flying around... too many!! As much as I love mystery, i hate waiting much. much more..

On 01/25/2011 07:31 PM, Frostina said:

OMY!! i really shouldnt have started... now u do realize, i'm gonna be bugging you.. Please please post soon.. so so many questions flying around... too many!! As much as I love mystery, i hate waiting much. much more..

On 01/25/2011 07:08 PM, Ramon said:

Hmm... It feels like you are flashing me a still picture. It is intriguing, but I don't really understand what is happening. I know there is a decision that needs to be made but I'm not sure what that decision is for. I'm not sure if they they already know who the girl is or will find out. I also want to know what the secret is. So in short, I need to read the next chapter.

You definitely got me interested, keep posting, I'm gonna read your story here and give you the reps and reviews needed and deserved. I liked this start it was both ominous and rueful. The images flowed in my mind like a movie scene, not at all a still shot for me. Yes!

On 01/26/2011 10:19 AM, Marzipan said:

You definitely got me interested, keep posting, I'm gonna read your story here and give you the reps and reviews needed and deserved. I liked this start it was both ominous and rueful. The images flowed in my mind like a movie scene, not at all a still shot for me. Yes!

There is definitely mystery here. I like a bit of mystery to open up a story. At times it was a bit difficult for me to keep all the different characters straight, but then this is only the prologue. Will have to read chapter one very soon. Thanks for the read!

Ooooh... intriguing. So many questions and secrets. And I bet you are not going to tell us what the big decision is and who it concerns either, are you

On 01/27/2011 07:04 AM, Nephylim said:

Ooooh... intriguing. So many questions and secrets. And I bet you are not going to tell us what the big decision is and who it concerns either, are you

On 01/27/2011 01:20 AM, AnytaSunday said:

There is definitely mystery here. I like a bit of mystery to open up a story. At times it was a bit difficult for me to keep all the different characters straight, but then this is only the prologue. Will have to read chapter one very soon. Thanks for the read!

On 01/27/2011 01:20 AM, AnytaSunday said:

There is definitely mystery here. I like a bit of mystery to open up a story. At times it was a bit difficult for me to keep all the different characters straight, but then this is only the prologue. Will have to read chapter one very soon. Thanks for the read!

On 01/29/2011 03:40 AM, Cia said:

Interesting start. You raise a lot of questions that should give this story plenty of material to keep readers interesting. Secrets are so hard to resist!!!