A Night on Pine Ridge

Some campers get lost a little "In Too Deep" into the woods. But what resides deep within Rowan that is brought to light by his friend Ethan? Read on to find out!

I only give this story four stars, because I think it deserves more attention. Setup and location are good and the idea is solid. However, the side story with the missing campers doesn't really contribute anything emotionally and the way Rowan and Ethan talk seems a bit off for teenagers. All in all, an enjoyable read and I hope this story gets extended.

We have Rowan, reunited with a childhood friend to help search for some missing campers on Pine Ridge.

There is much more to this story, but I can’t say anything else without revealing to much.

All I can say is give this wonderful story a read.

The story is fascinating, but feels like much more could follow,  Several sequel chapters would clear up a few points that seem a bit fuzzy.

Sometimes friendship can become much more, and at the same time generate more mystery as more is learned about another person.  I recommend this.

A very nice short story with elements of mystery and desire. Set in the Adirondacks of New York. 

A nice set of characters to get to know as you sit by the fire on a chilly night. 

Definitely worth the read!