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A Night on Pine Ridge

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Rowan Willowbark is a budding cryptozoologist studying in his tiny town's library. But when some campers go missing, he's called upon to help with the rescue efforts, being paired with a childhood friend. Now, with the dark falling and the cold setting in, they need to help the rescue team.

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  • 10/23/2024 (Updated: 10/24/2024)
  • 1 Chapters
  • 2,715 Words
  • 995 Views
  • 11 Comments
  • Teen
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  • Action Packed 1
  • Addictive/Pacing 3
  • Characters 5
  • Chills 3
  • Cliffhanger 2
  • Compelling 5
  • Feel-Good 2
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 0
  • Unique 5
  • World Building 2

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Jack Poignet

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

I only give this story four stars, because I think it deserves more attention. Setup and location are good and the idea is solid. However, the side story with the missing campers doesn't really contribute anything emotionally and the way Rowan and Ethan talk seems a bit off for teenagers. All in all, an enjoyable read and I hope this story gets extended.

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chris191070

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

We have Rowan, reunited with a childhood friend to help search for some missing campers on Pine Ridge.

There is much more to this story, but I can’t say anything else without revealing to much.

All I can say is give this wonderful story a read.

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ReaderPaul

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

The story is fascinating, but feels like much more could follow,  Several sequel chapters would clear up a few points that seem a bit fuzzy.

Sometimes friendship can become much more, and at the same time generate more mystery as more is learned about another person.  I recommend this.

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P. E. Knapp

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

A very nice short story with elements of mystery and desire. Set in the Adirondacks of New York. 

A nice set of characters to get to know as you sit by the fire on a chilly night. 

Definitely worth the read!

 

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