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April Weather: NaPoWriMo2018 - 4. April 22 through April 28

I am indebted to tim for inspiring me to try a Pantoum on April 26. I have also attempted a Doha here (April 27), but I fear my presentation is awkward at best. I beg your indulgence.

April 22

 

Jacob saw the angels climbing,

weary of their earthly griming,

up to heav’n for terce and priming,

bright celestial bells a-chiming.

 

Down the rungs still more descended,

wings dry cleaned and garments mended,

rest and relaxation ended,

off to creatures whom they tended.

 

In his restless journeyed dreaming

he espied the seraphs streaming,

lit by cosmic radiance beaming

on the mass of mortals teeming.

 

Thus I wake in airport’s blaring,

Genesis my mind ensnaring,

here to gates of life repairing,

soon the clouds to fly I’m daring.


 

April 23

 

From the roof

of my grandmother’s barn

I gaze out on spruce woods and new hay;

golden sun and hot shingles baking skin and brain,

while in my high summer solitude

I contemplate fearful

horizons.


 

April 24

 

My muse is as a pinkly panting pup,

with grin and laughing eye and hanging tongue;

delighted on my hiking boots to sup,

enthusiastic, as befits the young.

It hurtles ‘cross the lawn in search of play;

each tree a point of interest worth three stars,

but never in contentment would it stay

within my painted fences’ iron bars.

Sweet inspiration’s not to be controlled;

it scampers off into the deepest wood

to leave imagination blank and cold,

not sitting by my footstool, as it should.

Yet never would I bring my pup to heel,

for only in its frolic do I feel.


 

April 25

 

I’m lost,

as one by one

the stars I once steered by

go dark and blank, or else obscured

by clouds;

cold rain

must surely follow in the night,

while I light more candles

to guide my feet

forward.


 

April 26

 

The words rain down so hard they cease to count;

soon minds will flood, their weedy banks o’erflow,

long used to inundation of this kind,

their thinking shows which way the current moves.

Soon minds will flood, their weedy banks o’erflow;

odd creatures seek a refuge in the brain,

their thinking shows which way the current moves;

the downpour is too great to stay unscathed.

Odd creatures seek a refuge in the brain,

nocturnal fantasies move to the heart;

the downpour is too great to stay unscathed,

they scamper through the wet to warmer ground.

Nocturnal fantasies move to the heart,

long used to inundation of this kind

they scamper through the wet to higher ground

as words rain down so hard they cease to count.


 

April 27

 

Sweet love’s benediction,

skin on bare skin,

blest friction;

 

Kisses given, not bought,

all senses heightened,

taut.

 

Hushed questions in half light,

heartbeats tuned and

tempered right;

 

Duet in canon played,

passion’s phrases

prayed.

 

Knees bent in entreaty,

ask, suppliant,

so needy;

 

For blessing open wide

let indwelling

glide.


 

April 28


Desire is blind,

and as a dreamer in the dark

whose fingers find

no substance in the void so stark.

I grope for light, but find no spark.

 

Yet touch that arc

of primal hunger all ablaze,

my strident mark

of secret yearning to upraise,

inviting your sublime assays.

 

The night amaze

and dawn my soul as rising sun,

for in your gaze,

all struggle with the shadows won,

my thirst you slake, I am undone.

 

Now there is none

with whom I’d rather lie entwined

till evening’s run

and sunset startles to remind

that to your body I’m inclined.

Advise
dearest reader,
and comment if you would,
for whatever you choose to say
does good.
Copyright © 2018 Parker Owens; All Rights Reserved.
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A worthy crop. I did like the pantoum and doha, which is an interesting form.  The 23rd i saw through a Merchant and Ivory lens, and 25 out on the lawn, in an old lawn chair, on a cool clear night.  They are each wonderful. Lovely week, Parker.

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1 hour ago, Mikiesboy said:

A worthy crop. I did like the pantoum and doha, which is an interesting form.  The 23rd i saw through a Merchant and Ivory lens, and 25 out on the lawn, in an old lawn chair, on a cool clear night.  They are each wonderful. Lovely week, Parker.

Thank you for inspiring me to write the pantoum. It was fun and challenging to try. The interlocking lines really appeal to me. I know that I don’t know enough about the Doha; perhaps there will be feedback from others on GA with greater knowledge than mine. But it was a very different sort of poem to write. 

 

I can’t climb up on my grandmother’s barn anymore. But I still recall the solitude and warmth of the ascent. And the stars from her back yard were always clearer there than anywhere. 

 

Thank you for reading these and commenting on them. 

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5 minutes ago, Parker Owens said:

 

Thank you for inspiring me to write the pantoum. It was fun and challenging to try. The interlocking lines really appeal to me. I know that I don’t know enough about the Doha; perhaps there will be feedback from others on GA with greater knowledge than mine. But it was a very different sort of poem to write. 

 

I can’t climb up on my grandmother’s barn anymore. But I still recall the solitude and warmth of the ascent. And the stars from her back yard were always clearer there than anywhere. 

 

Thank you for reading these and commenting on them. 

i had to look up the rules for the doha.. it does look interesting... we shall see!

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Another beautiful collection Parker. 22 I thought the term Jacob’s Ladder. Wonderful in its flow.

I’m drawn to both 25 and 28. Just due to the honesty and vulnerability. Well done Parker.

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Brilliance once again, Parker. Bad head cold so it hurts to think... I will say I found April 27 exquisite. Well done with all of them... cheers... Gary....

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These are all wonderful in their own right.  I love your take on the prompts, especially the dog and rain.  And the rooftop.  As always, I am in awe of your use of form.  Well done, Parker. :) 

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A substantially diverse collection of works and images created by them . My mind however refuses to be disengaged from the image of freshly laundered angels descending to once again to get their hands and everything else dirty ! 

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17 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

Another beautiful collection Parker. 22 I thought the term Jacob’s Ladder. Wonderful in its flow.

I’m drawn to both 25 and 28. Just due to the honesty and vulnerability. Well done Parker.

Thank you, jp. I'm really grateful you read these, and your response makes me glad. Jacob's Ladder was frustrating, because the paper I wrote it on disappeared (I think I recycled it by mistake), and I had to reconstruct it from memory. April 25 speaks to a winter full of losses; April 28 speaks to the spring, I hope. Thanks again.

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16 hours ago, Headstall said:

Brilliance once again, Parker. Bad head cold so it hurts to think... I will say I found April 27 exquisite. Well done with all of them... cheers... Gary....

Thank you very  much for your kind and generous words, made more so knowing you are feeling under the weather. April 27 was highly experimental - and I think I ought to rework it when time permits. It makes me happy that you liked it, nonetheless. Hope you are feeling better soon.

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13 hours ago, Valkyrie said:

These are all wonderful in their own right.  I love your take on the prompts, especially the dog and rain.  And the rooftop.  As always, I am in awe of your use of form.  Well done, Parker. :) 

 

I wondered if you would like April 24, for its canine images. The rain (and snow) this winter have given me far too much inspiration. The memory of my grandmother's home in summertime will linger with me forever, like a long, slow summer sunset. Your words are very kind, and I am most grateful for your comments.

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10 hours ago, deville said:

A substantially diverse collection of works and images created by them . My mind however refuses to be disengaged from the image of freshly laundered angels descending to once again to get their hands and everything else dirty ! 

 

It was irresistible to think of angels headed back to heaven for a bit of rest. I can imagine humankind must keep guardian angels pretty busy - and who knows what air pollution must do to their wings. Thanks for lingering over that image; it held me captive for quite a while.

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5 hours ago, Dolores Esteban said:

The poems are perfectly crafted. You're truly a master of forms.

 

Your words are most generous. I am grateful you too the time to read these, and to react to them. Thank you.

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