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My GA Writing Prompts - 8. Two Trains of Morning Thought

In response to Poetry Prompt 3 - Lyrics.
Two Trains of Morning Thought
 
Snowshoe paws land upon my chest
Morning's hard awakening
Go away, Cat; it's the weekend
Pussy purring patiently
 
Waterdog Trail Loop calls my name
Stretch limbs for pounding ride
Bike's been sitting on the trainer
But pumped and lubed, I'll glide
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Percy
On 11/03/2014 04:34 AM, carringtonrj said:
nice to know you glide when you're pumped and lubed. x
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Percy
On 11/03/2014 04:48 AM, AC Benus said:
Thank you, Percy, for taking the Poetry Prompt 3 challenge! I'll add more thoughts in the prompt thread :)

 

http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/topic/39690-poetry-prompt-3-%E2%80%93-lyrics/#entry489335

Thanks, AC. The prompts are fun. I did think about the 8/7 cadence in the first stanza but I liked the way it sounded so I kept it. With emphasis on "way" and "pay" sounds in the offending lines, and a bit of an elide, it works.
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Aditus

Snowshoe paws sounds like Maine Coon, I have an eight weeks old since two weeks. Will she wake me like that? Now I can't wait.

I like it. :)

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Percy
On 11/03/2014 10:00 PM, aditus said:
Snowshoe paws sounds like Maine Coon, I have an eight weeks old since two weeks. Will she wake me like that? Now I can't wait.

I like it. :)

Thank you. Cat makes sure we give her breakfast like clockwork and there's no explaining about changing the clocks to a cat! Have fun with your new addition. :-)
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Irritable1

I love the cat literally delivering morning's hard awakening! I remember that thud of paws on sternum so well. I had the same thought as carringonrj, that whole second stanza sounds like a double entendre!

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Percy
On 11/05/2014 07:59 AM, Irritable1 said:
I love the cat literally delivering morning's hard awakening! I remember that thud of paws on sternum so well. I had the same thought as carringonrj, that whole second stanza sounds like a double entendre!
Thanks, Irri. The 2nd and 4th lines of each stanza were all meant to be double entendres but didn't quite come off. Not sure I can parce my morning feelings into distinct categories. They are a jumble of: want sex-want to start on the day's agenda-want the cat to feed itself!
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