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My GA Writing Prompts - 7. Poetry Prompt - Haiku

Snow caps swirl in blue

Lilting leaves dance to the ground

Wind's delightful play

 

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Strangers shout then groan

Four walls with HDTV

Loss in overtime

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AC Benus

They are both really nice, but the urban one makes me laugh! It's like you are living on the same block as I am, because last night my neighborhood rang like bell with people watching 'the big game.' You really captured a moment frozen in San Francisco time - well done!

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On 10/06/2014 12:21 PM, AC Benus said:
They are both really nice, but the urban one makes me laugh! It's like you are living on the same block as I am, because last night my neighborhood rang like bell with people watching 'the big game.' You really captured a moment frozen in San Francisco time - well done!
The overtime idea was from last week where my college team lost to Cal in double overtime. Still stings! Really having fun with these poetry prompts from you and Irri.
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Lisa

Great Haiku, Percy! :)

 

I really loved the sports one; I could see the crowd yelling and screaming at the TV! :P

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On 10/06/2014 01:17 PM, Lisa said:
Great Haiku, Percy! :)

 

I really loved the sports one; I could see the crowd yelling and screaming at the TV! :P

Thank you, Lisa! I had fun with the sports one. :-)
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Aditus

'Loss in overtime' is the worst. So yes , I could feel it. The nature one was very nice too, there are moments like these, although they are short for me because someone is always impatiently tugging at their leash.

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On 10/06/2014 07:01 PM, aditus said:
'Loss in overtime' is the worst. So yes , I could feel it. The nature one was very nice too, there are moments like these, although they are short for me because someone is always impatiently tugging at their leash.
Ha. I miss dog walks. Lots of dogs and their owners on the trail I was thinking of while writing this.
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Ron

I'm in agreement, in the second haiku the indoor game on TV was instantly recognizable, and well placed within the outdoor season of the first haiku. Very nice, Percy.

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On 10/07/2014 01:56 PM, Ron said:
I'm in agreement, in the second haiku the indoor game on TV was instantly recognizable, and well placed within the outdoor season of the first haiku. Very nice, Percy.
Thank you, Ron. I appreciate your commenting!
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