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Cupid's Dart

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Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Drama

A jogger is surprised

I've been reading some "Flash Fiction" and decided to have a go. It's only 463 words, is Fiction, but I'm not sure if it's flash. The subject  was prompted by the prompt forum. I'd like to leave a link, but don't know how.

Copyright © 2020 Rigby Taylor; All Rights Reserved.

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Jkeeletupelo

Jkeeletupelo 938

  

I loved it, and I'm not usually much of a flash fan. Well written, funny and very original!

Response from the author:

Thanks for your positive comments. Very appreciated.

R

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Cupid’s Dart

2/25/2020

 

“I tripped over a guy crawling out of a gap in the hedge.”  What? 

 

Amoretto and Atman?  Strange character names, especially Atman.  Clever.

 

“His head kept swelling and shrinking into a mist.”  Satyrs, pool, columns.  Wow!  Smooth transition to the other side of the hedge.  At this point I was howling, of course, where else would they be?

 

Without giving away and your goodies, I’ll just say I did an Amazon search but decided a willing one is better.

 

Good, clear and quick twist to the end.  Thanks for this short piece done well.

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Response from the author:

Thank you MCVT

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