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Lines and Squiggles Resembling Poetry - 1. Tell Me . . .

for carringtonrj

Lies, sweet–sweet, lies

breathing caresses against your ear

Truth pressed upon your lips

telling secrets—bold secrets

Laughter in defiance of truth

holding a world in abeyance

My hands advance my persuasion

I tell you these things

Yes–No–Maybe? What do you think?
2014 R.L. Hunter; All Rights Reserved
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Ron
On 05/31/2014 05:24 AM, aditus said:
So it was actually yours? You're a poet!
:*) Yes, it is mine. Thanks
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Ron
On 05/31/2014 06:03 AM, Irritable1 said:
MORE. Time's a-wasting!
If you read my second blog post, you will find that my only other attempt at poetry was half of a lifetime ago. We'll see.
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carringtonrj

It's great. Interesting, intriguing, seductive. The fact that you dedicated it to me is making me blush. I'm very proud to have been in any way inspirational. Write more poems. Please. Write more dedicated to me and I'll be all yours! x

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Ron
On 05/31/2014 06:39 AM, carringtonrj said:
It's great. Interesting, intriguing, seductive. The fact that you dedicated it to me is making me blush. I'm very proud to have been in any way inspirational. Write more poems. Please. Write more dedicated to me and I'll be all yours! x
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Ron
On 05/31/2014 06:17 AM, Valkyrie said:
Nicely done :) Definitely more, please! :worship:
Thank you.
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Ron
On 05/31/2014 10:26 AM, Lastriana said:
Great Job!! Loved the poem :)
:) Thank you.
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Ron
On 05/31/2014 11:20 AM, Thorn Wilde said:
Beautiful!
Thanks, Thorn. If I could only get Benedict Cumberbatch to read it. I do imagine it.
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Lisa

Great poem, Ron!

 

It gave me goose bumps. :)

 

Hmm, now I think RJ owes YOU a poem. lol

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Ron
On 05/31/2014 02:21 PM, Lisa said:
Great poem, Ron!

 

It gave me goose bumps. :)

 

Hmm, now I think RJ owes YOU a poem. lol

Thank you, Lisa. No, no one owes me a poem, and certainly not the one who inspired this one. If I may hijack the reply, I meant to say previously get B. Cumberbatch to read my poem aloud - well, that may be more opportunity for goose bumps. :)
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podiumdavis

This was well, and had me thinking of those deep secrets that we all hold.. Many of my own personal issue's arouse in this. Those secrets we were told never to tell for instance.... *Goosebumps* Anyway. I liked it :)

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Ron
On 06/08/2014 12:37 PM, podiumdavis said:
This was well, and had me thinking of those deep secrets that we all hold.. Many of my own personal issue's arouse in this. Those secrets we were told never to tell for instance.... *Goosebumps* Anyway. I liked it :)
Thanks for the review Andrew. I'm glad you were able to make a connection.
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