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The Lair

   (2 reviews)
Genres: Horror,
Sub-genres: Monster

A young teen, failing to connect with his father, is forced to face his own resolve when his brother is taken by a mysterious creature.

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Story Recommendations (4 members)

  • Action-Packed 3
  • Great Pacing 1
  • Great Characters 4
  • Character Growth 0
  • Dialog / Banter 0
  • Plot Twists 0
  • Beautiful Writing 0
  • Immersive World 0
  • Satisfying Ending 0
  • Fresh / Original 3
  • Counldn't Put It Down 3
  • Suspenseful 0
  • Gave Me Chills 3
  • Funny 0
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Heartwarming 0
  • Emotional Impact 0
  • Thought-Provoking 0
  • Romantic Chemistry 0
  • Smoldering Chemistry 0
  • Like 2
  • Love 2

The Lair was unpublished for the following reason(s):

  • Removing story permanently

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Mikiesboy

Mikiesboy 154,463

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

The story opens with the family dynamic and ends on a sort of supernatural note.  It didn't quite work for me. Some foreshadowing of the creature would have helped this story. I think this author should attempt another story in this genre.  The writing isn't bad; the story just needs to be rounded.

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