Tim--just to let you know: I got and loved the reverse-carrot reference to Jasper--laughed right away and could just see him perfectly!

Eric blurting out things is what he did at dinner before going if I'm not mistaken, and Rob tried to stop him at the sink. (?)

On 11/29/2014 05:31 AM, ColumbusGuy said:

Tim--just to let you know: I got and loved the reverse-carrot reference to Jasper--laughed right away and could just see him perfectly!

Eric blurting out things is what he did at dinner before going if I'm not mistaken, and Rob tried to stop him at the sink. (?)

And yes you're right, Eric did innocently blurt out Nelson's offer to have him stay the night (during breakfast, not dinner). But he's learnt his lesson now and won't make the same mistake twice. Unlike Rob LOL

So it's 2019 and I don't know if you ever plan on writing more about these people, but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading this book - in fact I devoured it all today! It sucked me in from the very first chapter and kept my attention and desire for more primed. Thanks for a very enjoyable read!

Oh and I can't even tell you how often I laughed out loud while reading! I'm sorry I didn't actually comment on the chapters that touched me the most... I'll do better in the future!

5 hours ago, cmk762 said:

So it's 2019 and I don't know if you ever plan on writing more about these people, but I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading this book - in fact I devoured it all today! It sucked me in from the very first chapter and kept my attention and desire for more primed. Thanks for a very enjoyable read!

 

Oh and I can't even tell you how often I laughed out loud while reading! I'm sorry I didn't actually comment on the chapters that touched me the most... I'll do better in the future!

You'll be happy to know I'm currently writing on more chapters and hope to start posting once I'm done with the story I'm writing together with Aditus.

If you laughed a lot, my missions with this story is a success.