Pieces of Him(s)

Nightmears Nightmares

wholysoul, 19 Mar 2015

In the dead of the night

When a dream is in full flight

There you are in plain sight

That sets my heart a race

All I can do is crave your embrace

I know it in every bone

You still own my corazone

In the dead of the night

When a dream is in full flight

There you are in plain sight

Through thick and thin

You always had the dopey grin

Your body so warm to the touch

It never made me sweat, too much

In the dead of the night

When a dream is in full flight

There you are in plain sight

But what is done is done

And we can no longer be one

In the dead of the night

When a dream is in full flight

There you are in plain sight

I know I will never forget

How I left you forever upset

How clearly the wound shown

Because you could never answer the phone

In the dead of the night

When a dream is in full flight

There you are in plain sight

You blocked me forever from your mind

Leaving these wounds to never unwind

I know forever these feelings will stay unnamed

As part of my heart shall always lay unclaimed

In the dead of the night

When a dream is in full flight

There you are in plain sight

Then I knew I had to write

Well, since you asked! lol I made the changes in red.

On 03/22/2015 02:30 PM, Lisa said:

Nightmears Nightmares

wholysoul, 19 Mar 2015

In the dead of the night

When a dream is in full flight

There you are in plain sight

 

That sets my heart a race

All I can do is crave your embrace

 

I know it in every bone

You still own my corazone

 

In the dead of the night

When a dream is in full flight

There you are in plain sight

 

Through thick and thin

You always had the dopey grin

 

Your body so warm to the touch

It never made me sweat, too much

 

In the dead of the night

When a dream is in full flight

There you are in plain sight

 

But what is done is done

And we can no longer be one

 

In the dead of the night

When a dream is in full flight

There you are in plain sight

 

I know I will never forget

How I left you forever upset

 

How clearly the wound shown

Because you could never answer the phone

 

In the dead of the night

When a dream is in full flight

There you are in plain sight

 

You blocked me forever from your mind

Leaving these wounds to never unwind

 

I know forever these feelings will stay unnamed

As part of my heart shall always lay unclaimed

 

In the dead of the night

When a dream is in full flight

There you are in plain sight

Then I knew I had to write

 

Well, since you asked! lol I made the changes in red.