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craftingmom

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Hey All,

 

I decided to start posting my newest story. Parker and Caz have been helping me with it for a month or more now, and I so greatly appreciate their help and input.

 

I'm actually a bit stuck on this story--at ch. 14--so I thought posting might get me motivated to write instead of reading all the time. I really feel I need to get it out of my head, but I just keep putting it off. I'm hoping it was maybe just the busy-ness of the holidays and now that they are over I can get back into a routine again.
Last time I got stuck, it helped to post and see what everyone thought of it, so if you read it, let me know what you think. Every little bit of input helps!

 

Anyway, thank you all for your support over the last year. While GA wasn't the only site I used to post to, it is now. Because of the friendship and wonderful support this site offers, I stopped posting on AFF and Fiction Press a long while ago. This is the only place I want to be. :)

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Puppilull

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Oh, a new story! Maybe a comment from a reader can help you to get unstuck? I'll read and comment, rest assured!

 

There can be only one (writer's community)! LOL

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Headstall

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I'm still one of your stories behind, but I will do my best to stick my nose into this one... :)

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wildone

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I read the prologue and then carried on anyways :P

 

I am a bit confused with the break in narration, is it the two brothers or the same one? I'm not a 100% sure but might go back and read again. I most likely missed something ;)

 

I did decide to follow it though :)

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craftingmom

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Oh, a new story! Maybe a comment from a reader can help you to get unstuck? I'll read and comment, rest assured! There can be only one (writer's community)! LOL

That's what I'm hoping.  It helped with Lie of the Serpent to start posting and see what readers think!  And GA is the only one!

 

 

I'm still one of your stories behind, but I will do my best to stick my nose into this one... :)

Thank you.  I'm behind on Cards on the Table too, so I need to catch up.  Sometimes I find it easier to wait for a few chapters to post before reading.

 

 

I read the prologue and then carried on anyways :P

 

I am a bit confused with the break in narration, is it the two brothers or the same one? I'm not a 100% sure but might go back and read again. I most likely missed something ;)

 

I did decide to follow it though :)

I probably didn't need that break in narration now that you mention it... it was meant to be Kye coming back to the present.  The italics are flashbacks, and Kye was 'escaping' briefly by remembering his brother's words.  

 

This is my first full length story written totally in the first person POV.  It's been a little more challenging since I'm used to showing what more characters are feeling/thinking.  But I think sticking with one POV with this one will make it work better.  I hope you find it worth sticking with, but I understand that my stories aren't for everyone.

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