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drpaladin

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A promise, even fulfilled late, is still kept 

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The word promise comes from the Latin promissum.  It is the past participle of the verb promittere, which translates to "send forth," "let go," or "assure beforehand".  The concept originally described putting or sending something forth for the future, eventually evolving to mean "declaring or stating beforehand".  It transitioned into the Old French promesse (assurance, guarantee).  Borrowed into the English language in the early 15th century (around the 1400s) as promisse or promis.  

According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the earliest known use of the noun "promise" in English is from circa 1422, during the Middle English period.  The OED cites its earliest evidence for the noun in the writings of the poet and Privy Seal clerk Thomas Hoccleve.  The verb form ("to promise") followed shortly after, with the OED recording its earliest evidence from 1430.  

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In storytelling, a "promise" is the unspoken contract between the author and the audience. Established in the opening pages, it sets expectations for the genre, tone, and stakes.  Fulfilling this promise rewards the audience with a satisfying payoff, while breaking it risks confusion and disappointment.  The narrative promise generally operates using the three-part framework of Promise, Progress, and Payoff.  

 The Promise (Setting Expectations: At the very beginning of a story, the author makes a pact with the reader. This promise tells the audience what kind of experience to anticipate.  
Tone: Tells the reader if the story will be dark and gritty, humorous, whimsical, or romantic. 
Plot & Stakes: Establishes the main conflict, what the protagonist wants, and what is standing in their way.  

The Progress (Building Suspense): Once the promise is established, the story must progress toward its fulfillment. This is the engine of the narrative, where the characters undergo trials, develop their skills, and face mounting tension. Here, writers utilize escalations, red herrings, and obstacles to make the audience wonder if the promised outcome will actually happen.  

The Payoff (Delivering Resolution): The payoff is the ultimate reward for the audience's investment. It is the moment where the story pays off the setup from the beginning, such as a final confrontation or a character learning a vital lesson. Effective payoffs are typically described as being both "surprising and inevitable".  

Why Promise Matters:  
Builds Trust: Consistently meeting reader expectations creates trust and turns casual consumers into loyal fans. 
Hooks the Audience: A strong promise is the ultimate "hook" that gives the reader a compelling reason to turn the page. 
Maintains Focus: Having a clear promise keeps the writing tight, preventing authors from meandering or including extraneous details. 

Writers frequently utilize different types of promise moments to hook audiences, ranging from specific dialogue teasers to overarching plot promises. Exploring these narrative beats in depth can help you structure your own writing more effectively. 
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sandrewn

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2 hours ago, drpaladin said:

A promise, even fulfilled late, is still kept 

It has been just over fifty years and I am still waiting for my promised membership card. For an explanation go to my albums, look at the TURTLE file.

You have admit, if nothing else, I am patient person(I have nothing to loose and a possible gain 🤞).

 

:cowboy:(Yeah, I know. I stopped holding my breath over fifty years ago)

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42 minutes ago, sandrewn said:

It has been just over fifty years and I am still waiting for my promised membership card. For an explanation go to my albums, look at the TURTLE file.

You have admit, if nothing else, I am patient person(I have nothing to loose and a possible gain 🤞).

 

:cowboy:(Yeah, I know. I stopped holding my breath over fifty years ago)

Constant nagging or making puppy dog eyes provide the grease on which promises move.

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