Right, some notes. This is, of course, on the psychopath branch of the story. It definitely needs some backing story to have been done earlier -- I must add in more of the psychopath bits in earlier in time when I do the edits. A lot of the info they churn over here should've been brought to the reader's attention already.

Also, while Chris has forgotten, the boy that Alex kissed when he was 9 was named Ramirez. I think. He was supposed to have been, at least.

I'm unclear as to why Chris would ask Steve for a ride to the gay bar since his car is at the firing range.

Sharon (who just can't help noticing this sort of thing)

I'm unclear as to why Chris would ask Steve for a ride to the gay bar since his car is at the firing range.

Argh! Dammit, you're right. I'll have to go and change that. Bet I would've missed that the second time through, too. Thanks!

"f**K off," Chris muttered. He was blushing hard enough to show it.

Bless.

Bless.

And quite a blush it was, given Chris' general coloring and the time of year. (Mixed Italian and Native American, and mid-June respectively) It might've been visible from space...