Nasty characters are starting to rebel.

 

They do that, don't they? The novel I'm transcribing to the web right now developed a romantic subplot which I can no longer imagine the story without -- a minor walk-on character turned into lust at first sight and true love by chapter eight.

 

hehehe. okay, here's one for you: Owen from TLW almost ended up with Ryan.

Oh my, Dom I'm sorry, but that comment requires more of an explation please.

Well, it explains to me why I thought that might be what was going to happen for a chapter or so there. I can't remember exactly where, but there was a moment when I was thinking -- "what? No, it has to be my imagination that there's this spark here."

Nasty characters are starting to rebel.

 

They do that, don't they? The novel I'm transcribing to the web right now developed a romantic subplot which I can no longer imagine the story without -- a minor walk-on character turned into lust at first sight and true love by chapter eight.

 

hehehe. okay, here's one for you: Owen from TLW almost ended up with Ryan.

Oh my, Dom I'm sorry, but that comment requires more of an explation please.

Well, since the story

Dom, all of those thoughts make perfect sense in the development of the story. I'm glad it came out the way it did, though, because Aiden is so interesting.