Simple is good. Here's what I would do: I would make the letters less bold and consider reversing the text and background. The fat white letters are kind of hard on the eyes. The designs at Zen Garden are distracting and self-important, and if I were you I wouldn't lust after them. There are a couple that are simple enough to be nice, but if they're that simple you can do it with tables. (I am not an HTML or CSS expert: I have an obsolete version of dreamweaver and I know maybe ten or at the most fifteen HTML tags and that's all I need, thank you)

Other than that. There's no link to "Busted:" did you take it down when you decided to revise it and submit it professionally?

Busted was never linked to from my authors page. It's only on the blog, and only in first draft form. (If shopping it around doesn't get me anywhere I'll start serializing the finished form on the site)

I should sit down and put together the CSS for the site -- while I'm not looking for anything near as flashy as the zen garden stuff, some sane navigation, proper side bars, some background art, and stylesheets that are pretty enough would be nice. Maybe next week...