Jason Rimbaud Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 Here's the link https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewstory.php?sid=375 Summery: To deal with his cousin's death, Scott turned to drugs. Pushing all those away that matter most, he drifted through life believing love was a lie. And now when face with all his inner demons, he would have to find a way to believe in love or die. Check out Fracture, my new short story in eFiction. Jason R. Link to comment
Ieshwar Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 Here's the link https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewstory.php?sid=375 Summery: To deal with his cousin's death, Scott turned to drugs. Pushing all those away that matter most, he drifted through life believing love was a lie. And now when face with all his inner demons, he would have to find a way to believe in love or die. Check out Fracture, my new short story in eFiction. Jason R. I have read it and that's quite a start. It's so touching and overwhelming! It was a really good chapter; you told us what had happened to Scott and its reaction to it. Very original introduction. You style was perfect and absorbed me completely in the story. Will we have details about Ray's death afterwards? Waiting for more, Ieshwar Link to comment
BeaStKid Posted June 21, 2007 Share Posted June 21, 2007 A very touching story about coming to terms with a loss of a loved one. Very well written, awesomely delivered and great writing style. Wonderful piece of work. Keep it up, Jason! bsk Link to comment
Site Administrator Graeme Posted June 22, 2007 Site Administrator Share Posted June 22, 2007 Wow! I'm not sure what else to say. Thanks, Jason, for a very powerful little piece. I think it stands by itself and writing more about Scott and Ray would detract from this one. Well done! Graeme Link to comment
Jason Rimbaud Posted June 22, 2007 Author Share Posted June 22, 2007 Thank to all for the comments. Jason R. Link to comment
Conner Posted June 22, 2007 Share Posted June 22, 2007 This is the kind of story that inexorably leaves me wretched. I am attracted to it and repulsed at the same time. Conner Link to comment
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