Whispers

[Hylas]

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[AFriendlyFace]

Whispers

 

by Hylas

 

If I die today, bring me not to heaven,

Nor drag me down to hell,

But bring me to my beloved,

 

So I may whisper the words,

I've never had the heart,

To tell him in life

 

I love you forever...

 

This is beautiful! It reminds me of "What Dreams May Come" and Dante's Inferno. It's a very romantic thought that even death, heaven, and hell cannot succeed in separating lovers.

 

Wonderful job, Hylas

-Kevin

[Jason Rimbaud]

I love this piece. But unlike Kevin who said

 

This is beautiful! It reminds me of "What Dreams May Come" and Dante's Inferno. It's a very romantic thought that even death, heaven, and hell cannot succeed in separating lovers.

 

I don't believe this piece was about love overcoming death. I think it actually goes the other way. The author is telling us to have the guts to say those things we should have during life. I really like this.

 

Jason R.

[Hylas]

yep Jason R is right, Kevin (may I call you that? AFriendlyFace is too long hehe). It's more about getting courage while still alive. Thanks, and glad you both liked it.

[AFriendlyFace]

Kevin (may I call you that? AFriendlyFace is too long hehe).

Of course please do!

It's more about getting courage while still alive. Thanks, and glad you both liked it.

Well that's a lovely thought too!

 

Way to go