With Love

[Guest RettaMichaels]

Here is a link to the story, I'd like to have criticisms, constructive criticisms, and all so I can have input on what I did right, wrong, and otherwise.

 

Thanks,

Retta

With Love on Nifty

 

 

A short introduction is required. "With Love" was intended to be a one chapter short story. Soon after it was posted, I was inundated with emails asking I add more to the story. The resulting chapters are what developed.