old bob Posted March 17, 2008 Posted March 17, 2008 Sometimes the day brought a lot of problems . The weather is bad, rainy and cold. In the evening, when my feelings are
corvus Posted March 18, 2008 Posted March 18, 2008 This was a lovely story! It's funny how stories that take place in the winter often do most to warm your heart. I'm glad *SPOILER* that both Rollie and Tyler found homes in the end. Critically, I enjoyed the author's voice -- it felt very authentic, but there were points at which it faltered, stylistically. On the whole, though, it was very good. Thanks for the rec, old bob!
old bob Posted March 18, 2008 Author Posted March 18, 2008 This was a lovely story! It's funny how stories that take place in the winter often do most to warm your heart. I'm glad *SPOILER* that both Rollie and Tyler found homes in the end.Critically, I enjoyed the author's voice -- it felt very authentic, but there were points at which it faltered, stylistically. On the whole, though, it was very good. Thanks for the rec, old bob! you are welcome. But I prefer the written version.You can better "imagine" the scene and dream about it .
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