Agaith Posted October 11, 2010 Posted October 11, 2010 Phana! How dare you give Nephy that suggestion! I will hold onto my poetry in future to stop you looking at it!
Nephylim Posted October 11, 2010 Posted October 11, 2010 Aww... that's a little harsh. Maybe it was a little bit my fault
phana14 Posted October 11, 2010 Posted October 11, 2010 It's just so hard to see/feel a person (human) going through such an emotional and physical period.! The author has a background (apparently) of *sm*, and so she is SO prepared to beat our brains out while making us 'twitch'! I really don't see Jayden coming out of this in any condition other than *post comatose*. I don't see him remembering anything about his past. Anything about "Cal". Nothing but an open mind. A brand new start to a brand new life. That's all I see. And then he (Jayden) actually wakes up in real time. And the arms around him are Cal's arms, and Jayden finds that his OWN arms are tangled with Cal's in a manner that cannot come undone. No matter WHO tries to unDO them!! I love you Nephy! You are so totally out of the 'normal' world! *super hugs* @ Ara--You are so funny AND you have a very special sense of humour! @ Agaith--If anything bad happens to our boys, you are going to have to blame the:devil: !!!!!! And as far as you holding back your poetry? Yeah right!! Many years ago I asked an employer to cut me back (out of leadership) and his response was "Dave! You can't hide that talent!" SO, Mr. Agaith, nice try!
Nephylim Posted October 12, 2010 Posted October 12, 2010 I wouldn't dream of beating your brains out. i rely on them too much to give me cutting and witty comments which I so enormously look forward to Your idea is interesting, and I think it might be really touching but I have done the whole ... post comatose, blank mind... think with SIlver and I have something much simpler, and I think quite powerful, planned for Jayden The next chapter is pretty much written and, if I can hijack my daughter's computer again it may go up tonight, if not then tomorrow. The torture went on a little longer than I had expected so I didn't have time to kill anyone so that is going to have to come next but one chapter and i am still looking for a camel or llama
Ara Posted October 12, 2010 Posted October 12, 2010 If you really cant find a Camel me and Phana will get a pantomine 1 mocked up and play the role out for ya. After all its the least we can do. Im playin the front tho as I can honestly say on my list of things to do before i die playing the ass end of a camel hasnt even made the top 1000 and its my panto camel so I get 1st pick . Of course we will have to change the scene slightly if thats the case because even if it does tatse like chicken im not eatin. Let me think..... OK how about and then a camel pops along gathers all the remains in a jar and packs it off to front row seats at every venue of a Spice Girls reunion tour. Actually come to think of it thats much harsher than just being eaten Cheers Phana btw I usually just say what im thinkin without filterin so it does sometimes get me into trouble
phana14 Posted October 12, 2010 Posted October 12, 2010 Ara--- Just because I've been CALLED that all my life--that doesn't necessarily mean that I could play the perfect hor--oh wait!!--you said CAMEL's ass? Meh, they BOTH stink! btw-hehe-Nephy just dropped a big bomb over in the "Comicality Cafe"!!:nuke: I think maybe she 'forgot' that thing about "Loose lips sink ships"?
Ara Posted October 12, 2010 Posted October 12, 2010 hehehe. You are right tho i did see camels in the Welsh Mountain Zoo a few months ago and it wasnt a very nice smell but you know panto camels are rumoured to be amongst the cleanest and most noble of all the panto creatures. As for Nephy she could just be throwing you off the scent ya know lulling you into a false sense of security before she hits you with a real tearjerker I wouldnt put it past her at least.
phana14 Posted October 16, 2010 Posted October 16, 2010 hehehe. You are right tho i did see camels in the Welsh Mountain Zoo a few months ago and it wasnt a very nice smell but you know panto camels are rumoured to be amongst the cleanest and most noble of all the panto creatures. As for Nephy she could just be throwing you off the scent ya know lulling you into a false sense of security before she hits you with a real tearjerker I wouldnt put it past her at least. Well now! The "Queen of Darkness" has been a *cliffhanger* herself for about a week now. I could have-and WOULD have-carried one across the 'pond' faster (oops-edit "one" to read *laptop*) than those apparently inept clowns trying to fix her broken down thingy! So maybe we should start the ending of "Weeping Lily" on our own? I am going to sleep on that, and tomorrow morning maybe we'll find out just HOW much Cal loves Jayden? But doesn't Nephy know about public libraries? Maybe we could start a thing like "Where's George?". Only ours is "Where's Nephylim?" And maybe I'm already in bed and just don't realize it--but I see her standing on a precipice with her right hand shading her eyes, and she is saying--"Where the Hell did GA go?"
Nephylim Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 You guys are so funny. Okay so I'm back at least temporarily. My computer is patched (kind of) and I'm using it until it dies (which could be soon or it could be later) the lid is broked and one of the hinges well dodgy. One corner of the screen is split but it seems to be working okay with the bit of patch up work my friend did. SO I'm back for now but eventually I am going to have to get a new one and with Xmas coming it's going to be a while before I can afford it. Therefore I am going to do what I can while I can. I am going to concentrate on editing thisafternoon and I am going to post two chapters of Weeping Lily some time today and am hoping to finish the story by the end of the week. It's only going to be two, maybe three chapters. I so appreciate the fact that you guys miss me when I'm gone. It makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside. The only problem is that when I feel warm and fuzzy inside I need to go and balance it out by torturing a character.
Ara Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 So does that mean if I say Nephy was gone what when I didnt notice you will be nice to them? Just a hypothetical at the moment of course
phana14 Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 You guys are so funny. Okay so I'm back at least temporarily. My computer is patched (kind of) and I'm using it until it dies (which could be soon or it could be later) the lid is broked and one of the hinges well dodgy. One corner of the screen is split but it seems to be working okay with the bit of patch up work my friend did. SO I'm back for now but eventually I am going to have to get a new one and with Xmas coming it's going to be a while before I can afford it. Therefore I am going to do what I can while I can. I am going to concentrate on editing thisafternoon and I am going to post two chapters of Weeping Lily some time today and am hoping to finish the story by the end of the week. It's only going to be two, maybe three chapters. I so appreciate the fact that you guys miss me when I'm gone. It makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside. The only problem is that when I feel warm and fuzzy inside I need to go and balance it out by torturing a character. I am only going to say this ONE TIME !! STAY AWAY FROM JAYDEN AND CAL!!! At least until *warm and fuzzy* leaves!! I hear those two nasty sisters calling you! HURRY!! They need you NOW!! missed you!
Agaith Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 I almost feel sorry for Anya after this chapter, she didnt really want to go through with all this and she gets more than a slap in the face in the end! Better her than Jayden though!
Nephylim Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 Well, this isn't the end, not yet and Kelly hasn't retired the scalpel. Anya's isn't the only blood which is going to be spilled on the basement floor before this ends.
Agaith Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 I thought about putting 'yet' on the end of the last sentence but i don't want to give you any ideas! (Please don't kill Jayden or Cal)
phana14 Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 I thought about putting 'yet' on the end of the last sentence but i don't want to give you any ideas! (Please don't kill Jayden or Cal) She won't! I mean-she wouldn't-she couldn't-she dassen't!! What an outstanding chapter:2thumbs: ! At the end of the last one I had visions of Jayden actually ending up in a coma! And from there I could visualize a world where Jayden and Cal live in *la-la land* forever and ever. Sweet! But that isn't how Nephy's fable's go, is it? No. I guess finding out that 'wimp sister' isn't 'really' to blame, because her nasty sister *made* her help in creating this deceitful situation is supposed to mellow on into the end-of-story situation. yawn I hear the doors and walls upstairs a-rockin' and a-tumblin'! I hear help a-comin'!! Oh crap!! I forgot about Nephylim!
Agaith Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 I think, to get me through the next few chapters, you should snuggle me phana
phana14 Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 I think, to get me through the next few chapters, you should snuggle me phana aww. snuggling right here>3 Judging from what I've seen in your pics--I'm a happy camper tonight! Goodnight.
Ara Posted October 18, 2010 Posted October 18, 2010 Lol awwwww snuggles all round Anyway gogo Jayden show that psycho she aint gonna break ya ......well until Nephy decides she is anyway. Almost made me feel sorry for Anya i mean ok she grew a pair at the end there and paid the price it seems but then she did side with Kelly and anyone who helps her out is not on my christmas card list thats for sure Not long left and I fear help is here but unless Cals blew the door of its hinges with a shotgun I do believe its still advantage Kelly and shes serving for the match, although to complete the tennis analogy shes also British so it stands to reason shell choke and it will all go wrong
Agaith Posted October 18, 2010 Posted October 18, 2010 aww. snuggling right here>3 Judging from what I've seen in your pics--I'm a happy camper tonight! Goodnight. aww Phana you're making me blush Almost made me feel sorry for Anya i mean ok she grew a pair at the end there and paid the price it seems but then she did side with Kelly and anyone who helps her out is not on my christmas card list thats for sure Not long left and I fear help is here but unless Cals blew the door of its hinges with a shotgun I do believe its still advantage Kelly and shes serving for the match, although to complete the tennis analogy shes also British so it stands to reason shell choke and it will all go wrong I didnt say she was on my christmas card list I just appreciated that she didnt want to go through with it in the end (she's still a bitch though ) And to the tennis analogy. Kelly and Tim would make an excellent doubles team
Nephylim Posted October 18, 2010 Posted October 18, 2010 I think, to get me through the next few chapters, you should snuggle me phana aww. snuggling right here>3 Judging from what I've seen in your pics--I'm a happy camper tonight! Goodnight. Snuggles for me too? *hopeful smile* Lol awwwww snuggles all round although to complete the tennis analogy shes also British so it stands to reason shell choke and it will all go wrong Pish posh. We're not finished yet guys I was going to post the next chapter today but I realised it's not as finished as I thought it was so you'll have to wait a day or so. Mind you, given the ending of the next chapter you will probably need to build yourself up for it. It's kind of a cliffie.
Agaith Posted October 18, 2010 Posted October 18, 2010 Oh no not another cliffie! And definitely snuggles for Nephy as well
phana14 Posted October 18, 2010 Posted October 18, 2010 Nephy!! For heavens sake! Why do you think YOU would have to ask for huggles/snuggles? **pulls Nephy REAL close and wiggles** There! Everything ok now? I'm not going to beat you up any more over your running away from 'home'. I just felt---tut tut--NO excuses--so much like a stranded person with no way to smile left in me.:wacko: Actually I was three sheets (about) when I read ch. last, so I'm heading BACK over there to redo. And one more thing. I took a break from work ALL last week for two reasons: my b-day and I was positive that you were going to finish WL in that time span. I broke even. But we got you back! So I won!! @ Ara--Was that-uh-did you mean to say-uh-are you being nasty to person holding the power of life or death over our guys? *pushes Ara over to the cooler side of the snuggle pile*, but still close enough for him to feel us giggling at him. @ Agaith--I came home from a hard day's work a few moments ago, and I don't find you here? Why? Where are you? Just great! Nephy runs away from 'home' and then slinks back, and now it appears I've been *stood up*!! **crawls over a 'lump' to get to Ara,** "Take me back! Please? I should just give it up. You're ALL nuts! Well, heh, all but one.
phana14 Posted October 18, 2010 Posted October 18, 2010 Nephy. Dear sweet storyteller Nephy, I just reread ch.last. I looked at my review for same. What's there is ok. It's me and how I saw things yesterday. :wacko: But what I did NOT *see* yesterday were the two or three lines where Jayden embraced himself as a child-accepting the fact that he was not the cause (not to blame) of any of the things that happened to him. And, oh GODS, how could I POSSIBLY miss an ***Angel who had Cal's face***, reaching down to help our poor Jayden. Only THIS time, *crosses fingers* Jayden might be ready to accept that help. Right now it would appear that is the case. Soooooo--Nephy? What's all that noise up on the ground floor? Angel(s)?
Ara Posted October 18, 2010 Posted October 18, 2010 Belated happy Bdays phana im gonna have a celebratery cookies and cream cupcake to celebrate. Of course now onto more serious notes ill forgive ya for pushin me to the cooler side but only if you chuck in a vodka for me hehe. That is uaually enough to bring about forgiveness for all sins anyway. As for you missin Jaydens epiphany well theres not much i can say to you after missing anyas run in with the scalpel 1st time round myself Really must pay full attention to the final few chapters though especially as its all goin off it seems
Agaith Posted October 18, 2010 Posted October 18, 2010 @ Agaith--I came home from a hard day's work a few moments ago, and I don't find you here? Why? Where are you? Just great! I'm sorry Phana i can't be here all the time. (gives Phana an extra big hug to make up for lost time) :hug:
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