High School Hide and Seek

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You kissed me on my eyes,

Then you played with my lips as we stared out at an ugly beast,

That only sought to destroy us.

 

We cowered in fear yes, but nothing could keep us apart.

My stomach churns, and my hands begin to scribble in tongues unknown to man.

 

You hummed your song as you walked by me,

You have my attention.

 

I gave you my heart,

I threw it to you!

You caught it and kissed it tenderly.

 

We said nothing of this of course!

You kept my heart next to yours, in your locker and sometimes mine.

 

I waited by the door to see how much you loved me.

You challenged me further. I love this game.

 

You took me to the garden and hid.

Hide and seek, my favorite!

I will find you I swear.

 

When I do though, promise me one thing.

Throw me your heart, I wish to catch it, I wish to kiss it,

Then keep it.

 

I want to win so badly, you've no clue.

Spare me no hints, I will find you among the roses.

Don't worry the ugly beast did not follow.

 

Come here so I may kiss you on the eyes, and play with your lips.

I wish to hum to you my song. Do I have your attention yet? You still have mine.

 

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One of my old poems that i saved, tell me what you think and tell me how i can improve my writing. thanks.

 

P.S. this is also included in my efiction post "The ones that didn't burn" which has other poems in it, too. But this one is the most important to me.

Edited January 21, 2010 by Moon-ya