Michael

[myself_i_must_remake]

this is my new story: Michael

 

at present, the preface and first chapter are up for (re)viewing. there will be five more chapters and an afterword to follow.

 

tell me your thoughts!

 

-billy

[Nephylim]

My thoughts? Hmm... I have offloaded most of them in the review. The story is simply awesome. The style and content are creepy and I am sure by now everyone is guessing at the story. Knowing you it won't be obvious. I feel sorry for Rose but sorrier for Hessia... as for Mikey I dont knoe why but I get teh feeling he can take care of himself.

[Benji]

this is my new story: Michael

 

at present, the preface and first chapter are up for (re)viewing. there will be five more chapters and an afterword to follow.

 

tell me your thoughts!

 

-billy

 

...............Fascinating tale so far, I love your writing style! I wouldn't call it creepy, perhaps dark in the sense that the family madness portrayed here is forcing Mikey on a journey for the truth.