[DomLuka] Two Chapter Tens in "Desert Dropping"

[Agincourt]

I noticed that the real chapter 10 ("Calm") and the actual chapter 11 ("I Can't Believe You Made Me Do That") both say chapter 10 at the top of their respective web pages. This perplexed me when trying to read the chapters on my smart phone, which doesn't display URLs.

 

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[Leftcoast]

I noticed that the real chapter 10 ("Calm") and the actual chapter 11 ("I Can't Believe You Made Me Do That") both say chapter 10 at the top of their respective web pages. This perplexed me when trying to read the chapters on my smart phone, which doesn't display URLs.

 

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You can go to Stories on Line and there's a fully edited version of Desert Dropping on that site, as well as two-thirds of The "Long" Way, also fully edited. For some reason, authors on that site are shown under their first names, so you need to look under the D's, and Dom changed his name to something like Dominick Lucas. You do have to register to look, but it's free, and without consequences (read: you won't get bugged by them thereafter). Alas, Dom ran out of editing steam before he could finish TLW,or begin The Ordinary Us.