Hamen Cheese Posted March 8, 2011 Author Posted March 8, 2011 BUT speaking of being pissed, this is me at you -- OMG if I coulda bitch slapped you when I was reading that I would have - you are the biggest F'in tease. So Brain is NOT dead. I don't know if I am happy about it [okay I am ] or annoyed because you let us think he died like that. I have to say that was one of the better examples of 'killing' a character but not really, so I am still really pissed. Adam really needs to tell Brain about his link with Jacob. Won't stop Brain from feeling as he does, but it might help him understand things. And of course Jacob is a mess and if he doesn't wise up or shape up, he is going to cost Adam his life. Adam can't concentrate fully if Jacob is constantly f'in with his emotions. Now, since I do not expect you to answer what's up with Jacob, i.e. what happened with Victor - can you at least answer if we the readers will get an explanation?? That's not giving anything away is it? I mean even if one [both actually] died, you could still explain it. Right?? One last comment, your editing has really improved tremendously. I mean that as a compliment, so if that is why it is taking a week per chapter, then it is well worth it. Not that I minded, [i'm still reading and pumping your work right?] but I know how it feels when you post a mistake filled chapter as opposed to how it feels when you post a relatively error free one. Andy I see... Haha. Well here are my responses. Read at your own risk. I'm not sure if "one of the better examples of 'killing' a character but not really" is a good thing but I'd like to think it is. Haha. But I promise that the next time I kill off someone, he stays dead. Adam could explain things to Brian but do you think that would change anything? Hasn't Adam explained to him several times that they can only be like brothers but Brian just won't listen? I dunno... it could happen someday... maybe. As for your question about the readers getting an explanation, I'll tell you this much - the EPILOGUE will not be narrated by Adam. As for the editing... well, I hope it improved! Haha. The annoying part is no matter how many times I've read it before, I always find something I want to change. Thanks though!
Hamen Cheese Posted March 14, 2011 Author Posted March 14, 2011 And the boys march to their own fight... Ch 37: City Under Siege Ch 38: Deception Ch 39: A Prophecy Fulfilled Ch 40: EPILOGUE
Hamen Cheese Posted March 21, 2011 Author Posted March 21, 2011 Adam finally finds out what it's all about. But, is he too late to stop what's coming? Ch 38: Deception Ch 39: A Prophecy Fulfilled Ch 40: EPILOGUE
Hamen Cheese Posted March 29, 2011 Author Posted March 29, 2011 Apologies for the delay. I was too busy with work yesterday to wrap up this chapter and post it. I hope it makes sense and that you liked the way it was done. One more chapter plus the epilogue left and Adamagika: The Spirit Within is done. Ch 39: A Prophecy Fulfilled Ch 40: EPILOGUE
Andrew Q Gordon Posted March 30, 2011 Posted March 30, 2011 SO one more chapter and an epilogue and you begin working furiously on the next installment, right??? This is one of these chapters that you love and hate at once. It was quite brilliant, but I hated Jacob leaving us. I won't say I didn't expect this since he drugged Adam, but I always hoped it wouldn't happen. As always there are hundred and one questions, but since you won't answer them anyway, why ask. Oh you were my 450th review. Good place to notch that milestone.
Hamen Cheese Posted March 30, 2011 Author Posted March 30, 2011 Oh I didn't even realize you could monitor how many reviews you made haha. Like what I said in my review reply, the sequel won't be worked on for quite awhile though it doesn't mean I'll stop writing. I'm already working on another story (which you have actually read partially before I took my hiatus) which I'm hoping to finish this time around. Writing this other story made me realize that emotional narratives filled with self-reflection are not my strength but I did want to give it a try. Besides, the story is there in my head just begging to be written down. I intend to write a sequel eventually though. I actually have the plot of the next one down from beginning to end. But of course it's one thing to narrate a series of events and another to make it interesting enough to read. Hehe.
Andrew Q Gordon Posted March 30, 2011 Posted March 30, 2011 Since there is no definitive plan to write a sequel when you post the epilogue will you at least answer question??? Please?
Hamen Cheese Posted March 31, 2011 Author Posted March 31, 2011 Of course. But, it would depend on the question. I'm a reasonable man.
Andrew Q Gordon Posted April 4, 2011 Posted April 4, 2011 Rather disappointing that Monday's chapter didn't make it up today - Oh well, maybe tomorrow it will be fixed?
Hamen Cheese Posted April 4, 2011 Author Posted April 4, 2011 Rather disappointing that Monday's chapter didn't make it up today - Oh well, maybe tomorrow it will be fixed? Well, I did try posting it twice. Hehe. It's up now though. Ch 40: Survivors EPILOGUE This is the last chapter of A:TSW so I hope you enjoyed the story. All that's left is the Epilogue to be released next week. This will set the grounds for what will happen in the (hopefully to be released) sequel.
Hamen Cheese Posted April 11, 2011 Author Posted April 11, 2011 A gift for you all - an early release of the epilogue. This officially marks the end of Adamagika: The Spirit Within. i hope you enjoyed reading this story as much as I enjoyed writing it. EPILOGUE
naaz Posted January 27, 2012 Posted January 27, 2012 Yes, the story is good. Gripping. Though there are a lot of unresolved issues. Would there really be 'Adamagika: Edge of darkness'??? You've made our hopes soar high up.
Hamen Cheese Posted January 28, 2012 Author Posted January 28, 2012 Yes, the story is good. Gripping. Though there are a lot of unresolved issues. Would there really be 'Adamagika: Edge of darkness'??? You've made our hopes soar high up. Yes, naaz, I intend to write that. The plot has been set for that book from beginning to end. I was already starting work on it (but then Charlie proved a very pleasant distraction). When released, A:EoD will resolve a lot of the issues I left hanging in the first book. However, I'm woking on something else at the moment (which is related to Adamagika but is not the second book).
Hamen Cheese Posted March 20, 2012 Author Posted March 20, 2012 Finished editing the story. I probably did not get everything but at least it's in a better state now than before. I also added extra details in the Epilogue. I don't normally go back and add details like that but I felt it was right in this situation. It's about a paragraph or two more.
Hamen Cheese Posted March 21, 2012 Author Posted March 21, 2012 I am writing a mini-novel related to the story, yes. You'll see one, maybe two, characters from A:TSW in this mini-novel. This time I might write everything first, have it edited before serializing it here - that's the right word for it right?
Anya Posted March 21, 2012 Posted March 21, 2012 Don't ask me. I have another idea for a mini novel though *hint hint*
Hamen Cheese Posted March 21, 2012 Author Posted March 21, 2012 I have absolutely no idea what that would be. What would you do if I released the first chapter of that story on April 1...
Anya Posted March 21, 2012 Posted March 21, 2012 Hahah,, bet you don't. You'd make me the happiest girl on the planet. Without flowers...or chocolate! And I know you wanna make me happy.
Hamen Cheese Posted March 21, 2012 Author Posted March 21, 2012 On April 1 though...? And oy! This is completely off-topic now. Hahaha.
Anya Posted March 21, 2012 Posted March 21, 2012 Oh...haven't you heard? I'm known for hijacking a thread Anyway...I know you got something up your sleave for that story still. So get on it! ;p
Anya Posted March 21, 2012 Posted March 21, 2012 Bitchh i didnt see the april first comment until nowww
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