[Dezlboi] E-fiction reviews for The Boy

[Cia]

Title: Part I Reviewer: Bondwriter

Got drawn in by the style and the pace. Really nice story, quite uplifting.Date: 12/04/2006 11:04 AM

 

Title: Part III Reviewer: AFriendlyFace

Great Story!

I loved the ending; it was definitely a surprise!

Date: 09/05/2006 08:36 PM

 

Title: Part II Reviewer: AFriendlyFace ohh good, I'm so glad they didn't kiss. Great chapter though, I'm glad Brent's starting to feel better. I wonder what "the boy" 's name is? Anyway I'm looking forward to reading the last part. Date: 09/03/2006 06:25 AM

 

Title: Part I Reviewer: AFriendlyFace

wow, what a nice person is that boy!

Great first part. Very depressing, but quite good. I'm looking forward to reading the next two parts!

Date: 09/03/2006 05:54 AM

 

Title: Part III Reviewer: Formosa

Wow! I recommend everyone to read this, and be prepared to be amazed by how well this was written, developed and concluded.

Bit from what I wrote to Dezlboi:

"First thing that struck me was how 'witty' the writing style was. It really pulled me in, like the character is someone you've known for a long time is telling you his life and (life)story, with the added clever commentaries, muddle thoughts, ramblings and feelings. [...]

The story itself is so simple, almost innocent, like the unique boy himself and his ability to touch people, but then deep, sweet rimming on romantic, and so very human, like the discussions on 'healing', the image of the angel, and the characters' simmering, but socially-awkward emotions. "

Date: 07/24/2006 09:19 AM Admin Options: [