[Dezlboi] Efiction Reviews for Spinning

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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Hylas oops, forgot the stars thing Date: 01/09/2008 02:39 PM Title:

Chapter 1 Reviewer: Hylas

 

 

MORE!

Date: 01/09/2008 02:38 PM Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer:

AFriendlyFace Great Chapter! And now we know why it's called

"Spinning"! I'm not sure now whether it'll be Josh or Ben who's supposed to

be with Jeff. I still think Ben is gay and maybe confused or scared or

something. I'm thinking Josh is just the wise friend. But maybe

he'll end up being gay and Ben will be a good friend.

 

 

 

Anyway I'm looking forward to the next chapter!Date:

09/05/2006 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

Reviewer: AFriendlyFace Ouch!

WOW! So I really didn't see that coming. Mostly I didn't see Jeff

working up the nerve to ask him out, but I really didn't see Ben saying

no! I'm so glad there's another chapter for me to read! Date: 09/05/2006 09:42 PM Title:

Chapter 1 Reviewer: AFriendlyFace

 

 

Interesting first chapter! Jeff kind of gets on my nerves. I

think unless he does a 180 before this conversation is over Ben should just

leave him alone and clear out. LOL, but obviously he won't. So it'll

be interesting to see what happens

Date: 09/05/2006 09:10 PM Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer:

iThinkDifferent

 

 

Wow. I had absolutely no idea you were such a good, no GREAT writer. This

story is totally fantastic. I don't know what else to say, you left me pretty

much speechless.

Date: 08/23/2006 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer:

Boy In Doubt

 

 

I liked this chapter and I think Josh's bike analogy was nice. I am

disappointed that this turned out to be a Ben-less chapter but maybe we'll see

him soon. Anyway, just wanted to say I like this story and that I'm still

waiting for more.

Date: 08/21/2006 07:22 AM Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer:

Sterling OMG, Dezl, this is getting to be a really fine story!

Chapter 1, for me, was a bit wobbly, but all that exposition sometimes bogs

the reader down. I'm not sure we've heard the end of Ben, yet.

There's definately something going on there, under the surface. And then,

along comes Josh. Sometimes that happens in life--when you're down about

as low as you can get, someone unexpectedly comes along and gives you a whole

new slant on things.

 

 

 

You've handled this whole thing expertly, Dezl. I'm really

impressed. Can't wait for moreThanks for a great read.Date: 08/18/2006 07:49 AM Title:

Chapter 3 Reviewer: Formosa

 

 

Great, original story, and very well written in terms of style and how it's

developed. The first section here in introducing Josh in more detailis a

nice touch, since I guess he's not just going to be just any friend. And now we

finally understand why the story is called "Spinning"--great metaphor for life,

especially that of Jeff.

Date: 08/15/2006 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer:

buttershots

 

 

Hi! Great chapter! I was curious in the begining where the title

was coming from, but now I know. I'm going to be sitting here

impatiently waiting for the next one!!!

Date: 08/14/2006 09:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer:

Luc

 

 

I really like this. I like your characters. They feel

real. Poor Jeff. What a slap in the face for him. All the signals

seemed to be there, too. Just like real life there I really loved

your description of the walk after the dinner. I'm really looking forward

to reading more.

Date: 08/06/2006 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer:

Boy In Doubt

 

 

 

I love Chapter 2! I like how it started and the ending is...wow! Can't wait

to find out what happens to Jeff. Cool story.

Date: 07/26/2006 02:32 PM Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer:

Why Not?

 

 

I'm really loving this story so far excellent chapter and i can't wait to

read more

Date: 07/24/2006 02:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer:

Boy In Doubt

 

 

Wow, this is a really cool story. Love the way you write.

Date: 07/24/2006 08:52 AM Title: Chapter 2

Reviewer: Conner

 

 

 

Nice job on this story. The story's title sure came through at the

end of chapter 2. Jeff won't come out of his room for weeks. Looking

forward to the next chapter.

Date: 07/23/2006 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer:

misanthropicfiend

 

 

Hey Dez... I like your story so far. I like the bands dropped in here and

there... Music is good. Thanks for writing!

Date: 07/23/2006 09:46 PM