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Alright by Dolores Esteban


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I love this story. The repetitions, the way the pace of the story changes as you read, becoming faster and faster, until it ends and I'm out of breath. Now I'm left wondering why things changed and why everything became so strange.

 

Colin B)

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Thank you so much for reading leaving a feedback. I'm glad you liked the story. :)

 

The narrator feels that things have changed for the worse. But once you accept it, it is alright.

 

Oh! thank you!

**smacks self** cant believe i didnt see THAT! :wacko:

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