Site Administrator Graeme Posted March 10, 2011 Site Administrator Share Posted March 10, 2011 (edited) Alright by Dolores Esteban Things had changed definitely. I was asking myself why and when things had changed. :nuke: :nuke: Spoilers Below!!! :nuke: :nuke: Edited March 10, 2011 by Graeme Link to comment
Nephylim Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 It was a nice read, almost a poem, maybe a prose poem after all. But I don't understand it. Link to comment
Dolores Esteban Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 Never mind! Don't bother figuring it out. It reflects my thoughts on an incident. Thanks for reading and commenting. Link to comment
colinian Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 I love this story. The repetitions, the way the pace of the story changes as you read, becoming faster and faster, until it ends and I'm out of breath. Now I'm left wondering why things changed and why everything became so strange. Colin Link to comment
Frostina Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 Loved the depiction of the incident! but i do have a question... Why did u name it 'Alright'? Link to comment
Dolores Esteban Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 Thank you so much for reading leaving a feedback. I'm glad you liked the story. The narrator feels that things have changed for the worse. But once you accept it, it is alright. Link to comment
Frostina Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 Thank you so much for reading leaving a feedback. I'm glad you liked the story. The narrator feels that things have changed for the worse. But once you accept it, it is alright. Oh! thank you! **smacks self** cant believe i didnt see THAT! :wacko: Link to comment
Toast Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 This is simply stunning and elegant. It deserves praise. Thank you for this. Link to comment
Dolores Esteban Posted March 15, 2011 Share Posted March 15, 2011 Thanks for your kind comments on my story. Really makes me happy. Link to comment
Menzoberranzen Posted March 17, 2011 Share Posted March 17, 2011 Sterling. Loved the ambiguity of it all, and loved the short, sharp sentences. Simply excellent. Menzo Link to comment
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