What The...

[Lemons]

(Hope I'm posting this in the right place)

 

So this is my first story on GA. Titled, "What The..." It's kinda tough to write, so I thought I'd ask for some help.

 

I have a lot planned for this story, but my problem is: I have a lot of blank spaces to fill also. If anyone is interested, I could use some advice, idea's, feedback, anything I can get. I really want to finish this story, but I need input. I'd like to know what people would like to see happen. What you don't want to see. What you like. What you don't like. And everything in between.

 

Of course, I won't be able to please everyone. Like I said, I have a lot of things planned for the story. But for the rest of it, I would like it to be something that people really enjoy.

 

So if you feel inclined to do so, I thank you in advance for any feedback/help I can get.

 

P.S. Where the story is at right now is really only the beginning. The first four or five chapters were really only meant to develop the main characters. (And yes, I kinda dropped the ball a bit there, I'll be editing those later down the road)

 

Anyway, again, thanks so much

 

*Sorry, I'm an idiot. https://www.gayauthors.org/story/lemons/whatthe*

Edited April 10, 2011 by Lemons

[Johnathan Colourfield]

May help if you actually showed part of the story so people have something to gage you on

 

At the moment its just a list of demands and no evidence to help with them

[Frostina]

The story can be found Here.

 

** goes to read**

[Johnathan Colourfield]

Thanks frosty Will read it later Lemon

[Lemons]

Thanks Frost and John