Meet Colton from Imagine There's No Heaven

[LJH]

When I write about Colton Greaney, Tyrone Keogh comes to mind. A South African actor. It's the eyes.  The eyes I tell you... I'm sure Jo Ann will agree.  And Conner too. And Mann. LOL

[LJH]

[joann414]

I'll never read the story the same again    Beautiful man

[LJH]

I'll never read the story the same again    Beautiful man

 

Me too LOL

[Mann Ramblings]

What? Men have eyes? Hmm... interesting.

 

How's his rear end looking?

[LJH]

Well, engineers have tried but failed to emulate his perfect bubble butt. Lol

[LJH]

Hey Harris, this is Colton. Where are you? You know where I am. So how about you get writing? Or are you also blaming me for what happened to Bernard and Sue? Don't leave me in the dark, please. I'm in the safe house now and so much is happening here. We really need to get together again.

 

Oh, and how about posting a pic of Richard? And Sue?

[LJH]

Sorry for the long delay in getting the next chapter posted, folks. I hope you enjoy this chapter.  In writing it I really had to dig deep, hence the two month break from posting it.  There were a couple of false starts, but in the long run, it all worked out.  The next chapter will sizzle, so be sure not to miss it.  Some readers may be asking, why end the chapter the way I did.  Well, I thought that it was about time we put some of the conflict to rest....for a moment.  Don't worry, though.  There will be more conflict as the chapters roll in.

[joann414]

I loved the chapter, and Sue caught my attention with her compassion, and sensible thinking in such a serious, and life changing situation.  I feel these characters are all going through more than most endure in a lifetime.  How do you fix death?  Two of your characters are trying to do that while dealing with life.  Sue is their sounding board that keeps them sane, separately.  Great chapter, and as I said.  This chapter made me think of life in general.  Great job Louis.

[LJH]

finally!!!here is richard i have no clue who this is so i am going to go drool now.

[LJH]

oh, i had to post that pic cos the next chapter is burning hot. I wish i was either Colton or Richard. I had to stop writing several times during the next chapter and calm myself down with a cold shower. Thank goodness its summer here lol

[LJH]

I loved the chapter, and Sue caught my attention with her compassion, and sensible thinking in such a serious, and life changing situation.  I feel these characters are all going through more than most endure in a lifetime.  How do you fix death?  Two of your characters are trying to do that while dealing with life.  Sue is their sounding board that keeps them sane, separately.  Great chapter, and as I said.  This chapter made me think of life in general.  Great job Louis.

Thank you Jo Ann.  Sue is a very important part of this story.  The two male protagonists had to have a confidant, and when I began writing Sue, I felt that she could foot that bill, instead of introducing another character or even two characters.  So she is the confidant for both Colton and Richard.  I believe a good story should have four lead characters, the lead protagonist and his confidant, an antagonist, and his confidant.  I like your terminology here...how do you fix death...well, really one cannot fix death...to me, death is not something that is broken.  It is a finality.  A place where there is no turning back.  However, out of death can come good things.  I don't mean to be hardassed or disrespectful, but if my first partner had not died, I would never have met my husband.  I would have had different experiences in my life.  Life and death are inextricably linked.  How we fix it is not easy to explain. Some writers have written hundreds of pages.  The effects of death, in my view can be softened over time.  Time is the answer, but even time doesn't fix death nor war.  

[joann414]

finally!!!here is richard i have no clue who this is so i am going to go drool now.

drools with you