DarkShadow Posted November 25, 2006 Share Posted November 25, 2006 Yes... I'm hell for a prologue. I love 'em. Just enough to hopefully entice you into reading more You can find it here: https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewstory.php?sid=232 Link to comment
NickolasJames8 Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 ooooh, so when's chapter one going to be ready????? The prologue was just enough to make me want to check out chapter one, and to keep me totally in the dark about what's next. Link to comment
DarkShadow Posted November 26, 2006 Author Share Posted November 26, 2006 ooooh, so when's chapter one going to be ready????? The prologue was just enough to make me want to check out chapter one, and to keep me totally in the dark about what's next. If you'll be my editor then soon You're perfect! I don't care if your 5 or 50 lol. Age means nothing to me. No changes to the prologue though... lol that's a general rule of mine. Though... I do hope you will oblidge me for the next 17 or 18 chapters Feel up to it? Link to comment
Camy Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 Mmm Jason for snacks, or maybe Jason is Lycan too? More please. Have you seen 'Underworld' with Kate Beckinsale and Scott Speedman? Anyway - gotta jet or I'm not going to finish in time, then me turn into Lycan and come hunting. Rwoarrr gnash. Camy Back on Dec 1st Link to comment
NickolasJames8 Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 I dont really understand what a Lycan is, but I lycan this story a lot Link to comment
DarkShadow Posted November 26, 2006 Author Share Posted November 26, 2006 I dont really understand what a Lycan is, but I lycan this story a lot A Lycan is a lycanthrope. A shapeshifter lol. You're it unless you choose otherwise Mirage will write 'The Fey'. I'm sure it will be special. Link to comment
Mirage Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 A Lycan is a lycanthrope. A shapeshifter lol. You're it unless you choose otherwise Mirage will write 'The Fey'. I'm sure it will be special. LOL I hope it meets up to your expectations But i will sure do my damnest. I just printed out the lyrics to what you sent me. I know just how I'm starting it Link to comment
C James Posted November 26, 2006 Share Posted November 26, 2006 Wow! Geat prologue, and what an evil cliffhanger! Link to comment
Site Administrator Graeme Posted November 26, 2006 Site Administrator Share Posted November 26, 2006 Intriguing The narrator appears to be addressing the reader in the first part, which I found off-putting, but the concept is good. I got the impression that the form a Lycan changes into is not really a choice, though there may be some chance to influence the options. It's a different model to all other stories on lycanthropy that I've heard of, so I like the originality. The challenge will be to ensure that things stay original AND don't confuse the reader by the differences. Homophobic werewolves... whatever next... Link to comment
DarkShadow Posted November 26, 2006 Author Share Posted November 26, 2006 LOL I hope it meets up to your expectations But i will sure do my damnest. I just printed out the lyrics to what you sent me. I know just how I'm starting it I'm sure you'll do great with whatever you come up with! Then again... <EVIL SMILE> I'm editing for you! Gods help us all! LOL don't be giving away all my secrets now Music does move me Wow! Geat prologue, and what an evil cliffhanger! Now, I wonder where I got the evil cliffhanger from. You wear them horns as well as any demon goat Intriguing The narrator appears to be addressing the reader in the first part, which I found off-putting, but the concept is good. I got the impression that the form a Lycan changes into is not really a choice, though there may be some chance to influence the options. It's a different model to all other stories on lycanthropy that I've heard of, so I like the originality. The challenge will be to ensure that things stay original AND don't confuse the reader by the differences. Homophobic werewolves... whatever next... Well... originality lol... we'll attribute that to the green stuff in my pipe LOL I just have a twisted mind. I can't help it! Maybe they dropped me too many times as a baby. Baby's do bounce right? I've never had the chance to test it, but my parents assure me it's true. Everything I write lately seems to be a challenge, but I'm learning a LOT! So I'm thankful. Link to comment
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