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darkfirewolf

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  1. Sorry, but the Trump thing put me off. Because he would never ever do something like this.
  2. You have to consider that US - english is heavily influenced by immigrants which dont spoke english as mothertongue.
  3. Graeme, i am sorry to say this, but this story lacked the usual emotional punch of your earlier stories.
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    Epilogue

    Sorry to say this, but there is no emotion in this story. The story in words may/could be interesting, but i could not feel the characters. After chapter 3 i lost interest and the reading of the story took longer and longer. The story could be better .... it is not a "must read".
  5. darkfirewolf

    My poems

    These are some poems i wrote.
  6. darkfirewolf

    Chapter 1

    Der Abgrund Du stehst am Abgrund, weisst nicht wie weiter. Eine Brücke gibt es nicht, auch keine Leiter. Du siehst hinab ins tiefe schwarz, hörst deinen Namen zugerufen. Wendest dich ab, gehst 2 Schritt, doch kannst nicht anders. Springst ins Schwarze Loch und fällst. Fällst und fällst und fällst, kommst doch nie an am Boden. Denkst: Was hab ich nur getan? Willkommen im Leben. The abyss You stand on the brink, dont know as farther. A bridge dont exi
  7. Yes ... i give you that, but it was the most depressing chapter i have read to today. I liked this character ... and it was not necessary that he died.
  8. Oh ... sorry wrong story, i meant desert dropping, specifically the last chapter.
  9. "Anyway, it seems like I've read too many stories where someone dies meaninglessly and I'm brought down instead of up, even if the character finds a reason to smile at the end. It's disappointing." It is like Your story: In a fishbowl. You have done it yourself.
  10. Wrong .... they had condoms. And they had the abstinence.
  11. Yeah there are many but only one is the best ..... mmmhhhh hazelnut ice cream:lmao:.
  12. My Favorite Sandwich: 2 hot studs and me in the middle .... and to eat toast ham, grilled bacon, egg, salad, tomato, pickles, salad, ham, bacon and toast.
  13. Monogamous relationships are more or less an creation of the churches.
  14. Lord of the flys shows the true nature of mankind, such as most other books named and therefor they tried to ban them. Most people dont want to be shown there inner self in such a direkt and entertaining way, because they want to be better than others and have false ethiks and moralism.
  15. So an other one bites the dust. ..... Life goes on.
  16. Hi does anybody knows if dio is still kicking. and if so, if he intends to write more of his great stories or only to finish them.
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