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  1. Toast

    Poem One

    Thank you JoAnn.
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    Poem One

    Thank you for reading and making a response.
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    Poem One

    Ripped by Foster My self torn meant Torment Towering Abyss My view from inward Outward On the top Of the bottom Of my own Sierra Of scars It would be hard to breathe At the depth Of this height Here… The air is choking On regret And awe What Beauty I possess (process) Has roots tangled now Thriving in the ugliness of my decay In the eons of a lifetime In here Down here Where There Lies Me Ever prideful Of the fall If I exist at all But a speck makes waves Whether or not Awareness t
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    Chapter 13

    Good chapter.
  5. HAPPY BIRTHDAY, CONNOR !
  6. Cool, can't wait to hear what Dan has to say... I hope he can still talk.
  7. A moment of gentleness to banish the cold of forever.
  8. Great way to delay letting us know what happened to Dan and Mark and to build the story more. I so want to know.
  9. Thank you.
  10. The storm yesterday was mighty indeed. Thank you.
  11. Thank you.
  12. Thank you.
  13. Finding echos in the outer world that reflect the inner world is often where a poem begins. Thank you.
  14. I just read a tanka doesn't have a title. Thank you.
  15. Visual and speaks of the passage thru life.
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    Tanka

    Made me smile.
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    Poetry Prompts

    Responses to poetry prompts
  18. Stray A second of light Only a rumbling follows Not found in the sky A stranger lost and frightened Whimpers at my foundation 9.3.14
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    Chapter 5

    Oh, I love places like Powell's. I like your characters.
  20. I guess I can't have a Ereader with 1500 books in storage with a solar battery thing ? ATM, the one book I know I would want, I believe, would be the best encyclopedia dictionary available.
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    Wednesday

    I enjoyed this chapter. Despite the teeth pulling it was a memorable day.
  22. Gosh I hope the loud bang is a way out and not the end.
  23. Happy Birthday, Iarwain ! ♥
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    Gods and Devils

    Wow, you write one amazing chapter after another. Terrific story.
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