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    Poem One, Good

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem One, Good

    Thank you Carrington.
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    Chapter 15

    Toast commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Chapter 15

    Can't wait to land on ancient earth.
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    8.1.14 Repose Fabricated by Foster I got up Cause It hurts The lying In bed alone The pain Brings about The shady shifting From side to side From minute to minute From every forever Lost and toss Fondly and no longer fondled I recall our lying together Each of us saying, I love you Each so damn good at Appeasing ourselves Lying away doubts And fears And the sun from rising Again It’s not there With eyes closed Satisfaction Sad this act becomes Light fingered repose Lying naked beco
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    An empty mind is really full of nothing. Poetry.
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    7.31.14 Good by Foster I don’t know Who I am Today I’ve been off For so long I know there have been whispers From those dreams Leaking out Clever little witticisms The past A friend That I hardly remember anymore Did we love Did I care Did I do wrong You can stare For a very long time At nothing The sky might be falling And the ground might be calling And an ending will come A life is just another speck From head on perspective It’s flat Fallen silent All cliché Left among the echoes W
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on IAMAWRITING's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I enjoyed your start.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    There is a chapter two, I was too embarrassed to post, where I frolic deeper into my private goofyland. I'm not capable of the creation of the likes of a Melville chimney. But I thank you for kindly writing a review.
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    Cute start, like the guys... hope they are nice guys.
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    Happy Birthday ! Jammi !
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    Happy Birthday, Tom !
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    I enjoyed reading your chapter.
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    Every chapter had me hooked. More please. Soon please.
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    Comfort Boy

    Toast commented on kevinchn's story chapter in Comfort Boy

    This is really good, thanks.
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    I think the first three chapters are terrific !
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    Still liking it a lot.
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    I really liked the first chapter !
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    Chapter 12

    Toast commented on Rambling Robin's story chapter in Chapter 12

    I'm glad you posted, nice chapter.
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    Brideshead Revisited is an Evelyn Waugh book that became a mini series 1981 and later a movie in 2008. I wonder how you would view those. I remember liking Maurice.
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    Chapter 14

    Toast commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 14

    Enjoyed the story.
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    Dave's Rhyme

    Toast posted a story in Fiction

    Very short.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast posted new chapter in Dave's Rhyme

    Dave The most successful?… confident?… messed up?… guy I know in many ways is Dave. He runs his own plumbing company and owes a bar. He learned the plumbing business from his father. And he learned the bar business working as a bartender when he was on the outs with his old man. Actually he has two bars, both in the same old building… a renovated bank located in the small, commercial area of one of those forgotten for decades, up and coming, trendy, rediscovered, neighborhood paradises. The
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    Chapter 6 - Finances

    Toast commented on RolandQ's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Finances

    Lawyers and accountants and mortgages... oh my. Not to mention college. Why did this seem all the more ominous. I hope Well doesn't end up on the street.
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    Thanks for the bigger, longer, more orgasmic chapter.
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    Happy Birthday, Slytherin !
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    Chapter 10

    Toast commented on Fantasyboy69's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Cat of nine tails ? Cool. Tail magic rocks.
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