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    Chapter 14

    Toast commented on Rambling Robin's story chapter in Chapter 14

    Your story scares the crap out of me sometimes, but I keep reading.
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    I would give you a "like" for your review. Thanks JoAnn.
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    I enjoyed this very much. Good luck with your story. I will be reading.
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    Thank you Aditus, for reviewing and reading. There are many things one can contemplate casually or seriously or humorously about anything and everything. I like this about abstractions and poetry. I could write a poem about folding your space and time even, but then maybe not. Thanks.
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    Chapter 5

    Toast commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 5

    I certainly don't like what has happened to Kayden and Ramon is beyond redemption. But you write a very good story. Good chapters.
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    Folded Kiss By Foster Je t’adore Je t’adore Laugh Smile Blush Shut the door On all my dreams Escaping And Transmutating Prisoners All Pulsating Exposing Close my heart Shut the door On all Je t’adore In desperation I don’t understand Until I look at you Really look at you This folded kiss A letter creased Into joy Je t’adore My world On a good day On any day 8.15.14 It’s Friday again.
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    Sunday

    Toast commented on faxity's story chapter in Sunday

    I am enjoying the story, but honestly the cave kind of worries me.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I think this is a promising start for a good story, thanks.
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    The Fisher King and The World According to Garp are the first to come to mind. Mork was just great.
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    Poem Three, Otherwise

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem Three, Otherwise

    Thank you Rano for the very nice review.
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    Poem Four, Stop

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem Four, Stop

    Thank you Aditus.
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    Pulse… by Foster No best effort Mediocre The daily grind And weave Of loose ends And scraps A trash pile Of failures To work with Blindly picking And discarding Minutia Impossible To be honest Always a con No clarity Just haze and mud speckled Eyes Round with deluded splendor Red cream coffee nut pockets Spilling chocolate giggles upon the floor Non rational sense pretense Spin Fall Shout Grunt Drunk On yearning To be heard Seen Believed in Useless tears Don’t a poem make They’re poll
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    <iframe width="560" height="315" src="//www.youtube.com/embed/VBmCJEehYtU" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe> did the embed work ? if not then here is a link: <iframe width="560" height="315" src="//www.youtube.com/embed/VBmCJEehYtU" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe> okay, I can't do this right if you know how would you put up the link Does this work ? I did it completely by accident, don't ask me to repeat it. But I like this.
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    Stop by Foster I don’t understand Standing under the spotlight Your communication You’re not talking… anyway But I feel overwhelmed with information Only Silent eyes Stare at me And it is music foreign To my heart It’s embarrassing me This urge To give in I would rather You ignore me Again Go away Go back into the background away from any focus… regard Guard Stop all this dancing Stop all the whispering unheard feelings Stop your damn smirking I can leave I will leave I’m already gone
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    Chapter 13

    Toast commented on Rambling Robin's story chapter in Chapter 13

    You are a talented writer because it all makes sense within the story's boundaries. But I really want everybody to be well and happy and adjusted all the more.
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    Thank you for working all day and posting.
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    Happy Birthday, Carl !
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    Otherwise by Foster My mind glamours All my faults deceived Into beauty… You have to be philosophical About a flame Never the same About a breeze That sneezes About a pee That tinkles About the earth Compacted Ashes and distraction and the necessary and the grave abound Reaction Response Random Runs on Naked I cannot be seen And clothed I’m camouflaged The difference between a body that becomes a corpse that becomes a cadaver That references me A shelley never revived in lightening In a di
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    Chapter 15

    Toast commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 15

    It's a real treat getting a new Jonas chapter to read.
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    I started reading Firegrass.
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    Happy Birthday, MikeL !
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    Happy Birthday !
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    Poem Two, Repose

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem Two, Repose

    Thank you again Carrington.
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    Poem Two, Repose

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem Two, Repose

    Thank you Irritable.
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    Poem One, Good

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem One, Good

    Thank you Lisa.
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