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    My Last bye Bugeye I wanted to find the universal While being vague about the specific I could never be in the moment When in bed with my conscious I wanted you to touch me Like the way I wanted to hush you With my hand upon your panic I could clearly feel surrender To the quarrel that could wait until tomorrow I could completely consume you And let you destroy me To what purpose but to follow The beat of sorrow I lose all my reality That attribute of my humanity The focus that turns me
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    Snowballs

    Toast commented on furnishedsoul's story chapter in Snowballs

    I'm glad Caleb's father found out and gave him a good piece of advice. Caleb
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    Portrait bye Bugeye Compromising Compressing doubts Press against This wound of thought Paranoia pariah priapic Pyramid Picture perfect Me Something light hearted Smothering middle of the road Something bright started Spinning out of control Splattered like a hole Something fright with fraught Delighted Something naked Me Born To be worn out Growing Too much too slow False potentials Visionary mode Just another laundry load Panic planet piecemeal Appeasing this peaceful fantasy Peacock
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    Happy Birthday Canada! I loves ya.
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    Easy on Me

    Toast commented on Autumn Dream's story chapter in Easy on Me

    I kind of like this immersion into the hectic mind of Dylan's first love. I like your use of language. Dylan is a hero on a quest of the heart.
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    Poem Two: Lover

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem Two: Lover

    Thank you KC, very kind of you to read my poem.
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    First Times

    Toast commented on Yettie One's blog entry in The Yettie's Blog

    First times never end, that is a nice thing about life. You can always begin again or explore something for the first time.
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    Lover bye Bugeye You are black and white High contrast beauty sleek Polarized color tinted pieces bleak Creases edges daggers knives With my mind silent I eye speak No wonder I wonder I wonder And let wander One finger Into folds of tangled sleep What are you Where be you In this mist of twists These wisps of twine Your existence here Just masking Marking time Mine ? Fine ? Wine ? This your car This your ride This breathing machine keen Beneath our window waiting clean Growling prowling
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    Cute as a button, and full of charm and wit and very well done. I really liked it.
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    The biggest baddest bestest bodaicous bubbly Happy Birthday to you. W_L ♥
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    Totally enjoyed your story, but ew the buyers were gruesome. Ten E made the right choice to escape. This was a romance but also a suspense and an adventure. Thanks.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Life can be so twisted and seemingly inevitable when it shatters, you drop your plot on the reader and it shatters. Good story and you have great control.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thanks for reading Percy. I like specific detail that reflects the characters. An ordinary object could in the eyes of a character be of great importance and be a real clue to who they are.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thank you Delores, I don't usually say more than that but yes I seem to be a very emotional writer. Lets say I was some kind of builder with words, while the cement that holds them together could be emotion.
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    Poem One: Purgatory

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem One: Purgatory

    Thanks Carl for reading. What is a poem, expression or communication... words used like scent to lure or like camouflage to deceive.
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    Poem

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem

    Thanks for reading JoAnn. You mention beauty. I don't have the talent to create beauty. I mostly grief after it.
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    Poem

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem

    I don't get many comments, so I often don't look back and I often don't reply if I do. The poem is hopelessly flawed and irrational and emotional, trying to explain a song that can't be sung. But thanks for reading.
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    One shot

    Toast commented on SidLove's story chapter in One shot

    Good story, well put together.
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    I missed this update too apparently. But so glad I saw that Lisa had left a new review. To me your chapters are so well done. This is one of my favorite stories on GA.
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    Thanks for the nice read and well crafted story.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Hatred on this scale would consume and destroy us all... all humanity. I doubt those who survived would be human. A well thought out and developed story. Thanks Bill.
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    Just to Survive

    Toast commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in Just to Survive

    No real choices often means the unexpected happens. Which makes for a happy reader. I enjoyed reading you tiger tale
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A terrible future to contemplate, but an interesting tale. Thanks for the good read.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Mark92's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Thanks for the story, it was a good read.
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    I enjoyed reading this very much, thanks Delores.
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