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I have Wii Twilight Princess. I got all the way to the last battle and quit. I'm perverse that way. Honestly, I'm not a fan of video games, but my 8 year old likes playing it from time to time.

I blinked. “Why do you ask?” I spoke carefully, casually, but I could tell from their expressions my caution was like openly admitting my parents were up to something bad. “Our parents sold us to the king,” Chester said bluntly. He crossed his arms over his chest. “Just like yours sold you, even if you don’t know it yet.” Teddy’s mouth dropped open. “You can’t sell people.” Chester snorted. Bart elbowed him. “I’m afraid it’s entirely possible. It’s not even that much of a stretch. What is app

I didn't quote you, because I wasn't speaking just to your comment. But your point that parents don't remember being 15 is far too broad, and I would respond to that. I'm a parent. I remember being 15. Thankfully my kids aren't teens for a few more years. Yet, I also see the many of the teens of my contemporaries who had their children as teenagers are now not really capable of making great decisions; they don't think of the consequences of their actions and tend to be very 'in the moment' even if they're engaging in dangerous behavior. That's even with the very clear example their parents made of "Don't do what we did!" Teens really shouldn't be having sex. Reality is that they will, of course, but if they just waited until their brain could catch up with their body it'd be far safer.

The main issue within the news topic is not the age of the teenager having sex in relation to just being sexually active, but in the fact that the person involved with him was 1) so much older and 2) in a position of authority. There are some people who such acts are even more egregious because their whole purpose is to protect and nurture children and teens as they grow to adults--and it's the rare 15 year old with the mental stability and maturity to make adult decisions.

Please remember, reviews are supposed to have some impartial standard when done on random work, but when it comes to these, reviewers are sharing their thoughts--and usually love of--a story they enjoy on the site. Some might not agree with the view of the story, but that in no way should reflect on the reader's right to share their thoughts with the author and other readers.

I grew up in a small, still backwards, area where things were easily shrugged off. A high school male shop teacher reported for telling a girl who asked him for a screw for a project to "Bend over, and I'll give you one." wasn't even brought before the school board. When I, as a 4th grader, burst into tears during one of those simulated 'Tell an adult' skits, was questioned the school officials the day after they called home, where I'd been told to keep my mouth shut about the past because it was in the past, nothing went further. Why? I kept my mouth shut. I knew I'd get in huge trouble if family secrets got out. My best friend growing up was fostered and then adopted into a home where the parents also had a natural child, and she always dealt clear double standards. I grew up in a blended family, and did as well, so we all had that in common, but since it wasn't overt, horrific abuse we just lived with it. We didn't know any better. Now we do. We both still have personal and family difficulties based on our pasts, but we've both helped each other to remember we don't want to be our parents. Our kids don't have to live the way we did. Social mores are less important than protecting the innocent, to the detriment of those who hide in places where they hold positions of authority, like the clergy and teachers. Our society still makes mistakes. People who shouldn't have kids do, all the time, and those kids pay for it. People who think it's okay to ignore the hurt others because they want something, or believe their wishes are more important, aren't always viewed as the criminals they are. The only thing we can do is focus on being the best person we can be and helping others as much as possible. I see commercials all the time that say something that seems kitchy, but it is actually very profound: Not every person can be a foster parent, but every person can help a foster child. It's true, and not just foster children who've been identified and should be getting help. Anyone can help anyone else. Small things DO matter when viewed on a community-wide scale, because the more we try to improve our society to raise the wellbeing of everyone in it, the more people are likely to see a good example and learn from it. Share food with someone who's hungry if you can't make a monetary donation. Serve in a soup kitchen or homeless shelter. Donate your gently used goods or take the initiative to offer clean blankets, hats, and gloves to homeless people during winter if you can afford it. Sponsor a family during the holidays for food and gifts or go visit an assisted living facility and take handmade cards if you have few resources because a smile, a pat on the hand, and a Happy Holidays shows you care to people who are often forgotten by those still stuck in the hustle and bustle of their own lives. This is the foundation of my non-religious denomination belief system: We should always be on the lookout to help our fellow men and women, girls and boys. As human beings our duty is not just to not hurt our fellow people but to help others within our capacity to do so because it is the right thing to do.

Thank you! I firmly believe some people just sync, and that's really what I want their relationship feel like. Thank you so much for the reviews, Gary!

I wanted them to just be themselves, even if it was in front of Miah's folks--probably especially then. They just work as a threesome.

Definitely an uh oh moment. I hope you continue to enjoy the other chapters!

Yay! I'm always glad when I can take a reader outside their norms, and they actually enjoy it.

Thank you so much, Cole! I really try to make sure I'm posting things from the correct perspective--and that means the familiar isn't so familiar to aliens and vice versa. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks for the review!

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“Schvesla’s dead.” The sneer I couldn’t see was readily apparent in my assailant’s voice. I tried to calmly assess the situation; everything from the tension in his body and the minute tremors in the knife to the harsh snarl of his voice was a clue as to how much danger I was in. How much danger Teddy was in? Was he alone? I didn’t think so. “We found a note,” Teddy blurted out. “At the scrap yard. It told us to come here.” “Some scrap of paper lasted a hundred years at the scrap yard?” The

This guest article on Writer's Digest's blog is absolutely wonderful! I can't say enough about how I agree with every single point made! The Highlights: 1. Your words are your tools; make sure they are in working order. 2. Check for inconsistencies. 3. Avoid overwriting. 4. Avoid underwriting. 5. Make sure your characters are more than a name. 6. Show, don't tell. 7. Sharpen that dialogue... 8. ...And expose that subtext. 9. Drive the plot toward your reader's AHA moment. 10. Build your world. Now go check out the great information and tips shared. http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/the-top-10-elements-of-a-book-people-want-to-read?et_mid=733701&rid=239107852

I don't like this holiday much. It leaves me open to too much teasing. I was complaining about the sun today burning me (It's only March, but I'm a redhead with a sun allergy) and my hubby called me a vampire. Then my 8 yo son called me a leprechaun. So of course the hubby comes out with "I want to suck your... lucky charms!" in a mix of a vampire and leprechaun accent.

There are several regional author groups that focus on gay literature in the Pacific Northwest, though I'm not sure of elsewhere. A lot of the time, though, you won't find their events advertised a lot outside the group, so my suggestion would be to look into that avenue instead.

Glad you think so, lol!

Thank you!!!

I do try! That's a really hard part of writing MMM. I hope you enjoyed learning what how Miah's parents reacted.

Thanks, Impunity! I have no idea why it didn't announce to my followers, though I feel like I really do need to show the rest of the story instead of just telling what they're planning, but I haven't decided what format to do that in. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Danish Drool Diverter? LMAO! Oh, this review is great!! Thanks so much, Timothy. Miah's folks definitely got to see how well the trio works together. And I'm glad I was able to surprise you on how they found out who did the crime and how why they'll pay for it!

I agree! This scene allowed Miah's dad to see just how Moshe and Lisco can help on the stake and how much they care about Miah and his goals in life.

Aww, lol! Well, I can't write in EVERY sex scene. There'd be nothing else going on. Moss is extremely hardy plant that can be found just about everywhere, except the ocean.

I'm always up for all kinds of likes. Being together is definitely a learning curve--for all of them. Thanks for the review, hun!

Thanks! I can't seem to let these guys go! Their story just begs to be told fully. Thanks so much for the review, hun!