Cia

LMAO! As a mom... that really tickled me. It is SO something a young kid would do.

My earlier post was an author who does have that type of story (I did go back and add the menage tag) and also understands your problem with ending up with content that just turns me off when a story takes a twist that isn't to my taste. I can't stand stories that have love triangles, for example, and sometimes I'll see things tagged menage but they're not really (not on GA) and it drives me bonkers So, I wasn't just speaking as 'Cia the Admin', though I responded mostly because there were other members making statements about changes they'd like to see as well. I'm the staff member who oversees Stories, so it's best to remind folks from time to time that they can contact me if they have suggestions or problems with the system--readers as well as authors.

We cannot dictate how comprehensive a description authors place on their stories, or require that they use exact tags for their content, for the most part. Obviously, for sensitive content that can trigger negative reactions for some people, eg abuse, extreme violence, incest, etc... we do require that information shared, because that can cause a site disruption. While multi-person relationships are not to everyone's taste, they are not an issue that will usually cause mental trauma so we do not require warnings placed on those style of stories. Any time members have a suggestion for Stories for things like tags they'd like to see changed or included, please feel free to PM me. Staff doesn't always track all topics and conversations on the site, so just bringing it up here or in another topic won't guarantee your voice is heard. Making a suggestion or request doesn't mean it will be implemented immediately or at all, I'm always willing to listen!

Oh man. That sucks!! I hate homework nights where it's all a big battle, and writing is often one in our house. I've started young with my kids with their writing skills so they actually get the concept. Just got my kiddos' (8 and 10) report cards yesterday and both their teachers say they have excellent story writing skills--but need to work on handwriting and spelling. LOL Damn writing mechanics, but they are so important! They are so lucky they're living in the age where reports and probably daily school work is all going to be on computers/typing vs. handwriting. Hence the daily typing lessons I make them do now. You have my sympathies!!

You know, I have my latest anthol as a MMM series with that tag for all but the last story, where it just slipped my mind. My descriptions are usually pretty clear if that element is in my stories. I hate getting ambushed as a reader myself. And yes, we don't allow custom tags, but we do have a list that covers most things.

I believe in letting the reader get to know the characters and story as they read, not just lay it all out in the beginning in a 'tell all' fashion. Balancing that with making the story standalone yet not be a rehash of all the other stories was difficult, but fun this year. It would probably make a lot more sense if you read the others, though, yeah. Thank you so much for the lovely review, Carlos!

Oh, that's a lovely sentiment, Sacredlove! I really like the way you viewed the story. I really tried to show how all three men were separate but it worked for them as they grew closer. I'm glad you enjoyed the progress of their relationship as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Aww, you're sooo nice! Thank you so much; I'm really glad you enjoyed the entire series. I've mentioned I want to eBook this, so I think it will need a bit of tweaking to make it a cohesive whole, and maybe some more added to the end... we'll see what happens! Thanks again for the review!

I know, Moshe is just yummy! I wanted to keep the story believable, even though it's a sci-fi plot. I'm so glad that element worked. Thanks for the review, Mann!

Aww, thanks Timothy! I'm glad you liked it. I really felt this story needed to show their acceptance of being a threesome, which really did need some lovin as well as their roles in their day to day life, too. I plan to put all 4 of these stories together as a novella to eBook. That will likely require some editing to mesh them into one story, and I might expand it. That's a 'New Year' project, though.

Aww, proposing in handcuffs, how memorable! LOL Great little addition to your series, Valkyrie. I thought Elliot was a little naive, though. Maybe that's just me being mean.

As I haven't read your other story, I was impressed by this as it stands alone. Often authors make it hard to know what is going on for readers if they don't know past connections characters have, but I didn't have any trouble with your story this way. I really enjoyed the happy ending, too. Randy was put through a lot in life, and he managed to survive--and even take some of his misfortune and turn it around to help others.

That's a sweet story, Bill, and one with a great message. I've seen local news reports about that sort of thing happening with the layaway, which is very cool. My kids and I try to do local events that provide holiday cheer such as caroling or cards to senior centers, or making doggie biscuits for the humane society, participating in the local holiday food drives, as well as donating a toy to a local toy drive for kids whose families cannot provide them with gifts as they struggle to pay living expenses. You never know when something as simple as a holiday greeting might brighten a day and renew someone's faith in others.

I love post-apocalyptic fiction, and you came up with a realistic storyline that definitely dovetails into current world politics. Your characters skill sets all meshed very well to make a phenomenal survival team, but it would make sense those few who'd survive would include many who are very handy in various walks of life--like a soldier/hunter, doctor, and mechanic. The story employed a lot of telling, though, as you laid out the scenes. I felt very little connection to the action because it was like reading a diary instead of living the scenes as the characters experienced events in the storyline. Post-apoc is often gritty and harrowing to read because of the scary events, deprivation, potential for conflict and fighting, etc... Your major sensory element was the smell of the bodies, but you don't give any visuals, and I'm sure many people would've died in public or in their cars. What about animals preying on bodies? Troubles driving because of gridlock on roads? We also missed out on the emotions of your characters. The biggest thing that stands out to me is the surprise at the end as Jesse kisses them. Where's the shock at the end of the world? Do neither of your main characters have family or friends to worry about? Disbelief? Anger? What about when they were confronted by the three men and Aitor gets shot? Lars wasn't afraid? Angry? Relieved he only had a minor injury? I really liked the plot line, and agree with SolarMaxx, a follow up would be good. Jesse's POV would be really interesting, since he has the most growth as a character in this story. I'd like to see what's going on in his mind!

That's just messed up!!!!

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“So we just dump this out on the ground?” I could barely span the rectangle of scratchy grass. Moshe held two of them by the cords tying them into the rough shape, easily hefting one in each hand. “Well, you need to break the twine and break off flakes of the hay, spreading it out in a long line. That way the cattle can come eat all at the same time. And you might not want to take too long about it. They’re coming.” “They’re coming?” I squeaked. Those things were a lot bigger than I’d thought

Miah, Moshe, and Lisco have a chance at happiness--but only if they can make a relationship between them work. Two alien shifters from a planet far from Earth, and one man who just wants to help heal his planet--can they trust the feelings growing between them?

“Really? A corrupt government hiding their people away to preserve their own power. Machines left unfixed—not because they are broken, but because it took away a chance for them to line their own pockets.” “It makes sense, Will. You know how the nobles are.” Teddy was curled up in a chair by the fire. Anna had left us, after she shared all her revelations about how the city leaders had shut off Schvesla’s machine on purpose, so they could force the people to buy their machines and coal to power

Happy Birthday, Nostic!!

Happy Birthday, Wayne!!

We have some great fun planned to celebrate 100 million, too! So make sure you keep an eye out.

I know, right? But there are so many directions the story could go and come from. Who are 'they'? Who are the aliens? Why were they experimenting on him? Who sent his rescuers? How did they find him? What would happen to him after he finally leaves the small room that has been his prison for years? *shakes head* In 300 words, a whole new world to explore was created--but I just don't think I have the time to write it, so it's left up to the reader's imagination. LOL. Thanks so much for the review, ColumbusGuy!

Thanks so much, Gene! The contest said 300 words, so I was stuck here, but I did have fun envisioning the story and where it could go. Thanks for the review.

LOL. Thank you, LitLover. You know, I rarely write anything where I don't get told 'I want to read more!'. Sometimes I do come back. Married to the Enemy was a 2k short that I extended to 11-12. Not a novel, but hey, sometimes it happens. Thanks for reading!