Joseph OHara
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A charming, warm, loving, and sometimes chaotic story centered primarily around two young teen boys and their families as well and their extended families. There is a lot of love and some danger and turmoil. I strong suggest you read this wonderful story or miss out on a chance of a lifetime for some quality entertaiinment. A great plot and never a dull moment!
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Looks like Nick has two strong friends. Good chapter. I really enjoy the conversational interplay. That is one thing you are really good at writing about. It makes the story very enjoyable. Stories are not only about plot but how they are told and how the characters behave are a big part of it. You certainly have mastered the combination! Thank you for the entertainment, Tony.
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This is a remarkable story told primarily from the viewpoint of an autistic boy as he grows into an adult beside his older brother who looks out for him. It is well written, it is insightful, and it is unique to the GA platform as I have never seen anything close to this in quality and subject matter. There are some unexpected twists but every chapter is important and necessary to the whole experience. Read every word and enjoy this beautiful tale. If you have never read anything else on GA, you must read this story!
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Another excellent chapter. I could picture myself in North Carolina with them. Your dialog brings us right into the story with the boys. Thank you, Tony, for your continued posting of quality writing.
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Another fine chapter. What a dilemma! Poor Taylor. I hope he goes home sooner rather than later. Maybe Bernie will talk him down and convince him. Good work Ron.
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A great love epic around a young man who does not believe he can truly be loved, due, mainly to his horrible mother. It is a bumpy but wonderful journey as he ultimately finds he is wrong. I strongly recommend you read this wonderful story.
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Things seem to be progressing. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for posting regularly, Josh.
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Another really enjoyable chapter, The conversations are very funny and make the story go too fast. Thank you, Tony, for a most pleasant read.
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Good Chapter, Lee. Every now and then we need a little excitement. Sorry we had to lose someone though.
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Back to work. Now we see where their orders take them next. They do seem comfortable with camp accommodations but I am sue they would prefer home. Nice setup for their next adventure whether it be staying at the camp or travelling elsewhere. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks, Tony.
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Chapter 2 - Road Trip
Joseph OHara commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Road Trip
The branding is about to begin. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work Mark.- 32 comments
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A great little story, Lee. Thank you for posting it.
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Two Straight Boys Too Many
Joseph OHara commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Two Straight Boys Too Many
Well done, Tony A great chapter with great repartee! Thank you for the first class entertainment. -
An interesting story that had a chance at the beginning to be something that might have ended in a very positive way except it devolved into gore and tragedy of the highest order. The author, himself admitted to ending up a victim of its negativity and had to bail out. Still an interesting read. Might be a lesson to us all not to dwell in the gutters of life that can exist and if it were to happen in real life to us, to get help.
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This wonderful saga has much torment and misery but in the end, all's right with the world. You may be tempted to stop at points but, trust me, you want to get to the end. There are many characters you can admire and some weak ones you want to kick in the butt but most are worthy of your patience to continue to the end. I really loved the adventure, in spite of the bumps in the road. It was well thought out, well written, and had an ending for which I was thankful Carl, you have outdone yourself and I want to thank you for the excellent story.
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A solemn and beautiful chapter, Two hearts finally coming together. You handed the dialog and scenes so respectfully and lovingly. Nice work Tony. Thanks for posting so quickly.
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Great Chapter Lee.
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Another good chapter Tony. Love it. Thanks for the quality entertainment and such regular postings as well.
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Poor Jason. He did so well and had a screw-up for a girlfriend. Great Chapter Ron. Keep up the good work! Thank you!
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Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
Joseph OHara commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Call Goes Out
I have never watched Yellowstone so I was not sure about this when I read the premise in the prologue but after reading the first chapter, I am raring to go. Sounds like it could be a good one. Write on @Mark Ponyboy Peters! Thanks.- 59 comments
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A beautiful story, It took a minute but soon it pulled me right in to a very enjoyable experience. Thank you for taking the time to write this tale.
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What an adventure! We will see how it goes with Cody. Some possibilities maybe?
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Another beautifully written chapter. You carry the emotions so very well. It was like I was in the back seat with them. Thank you for your ongoing contributions to GA. Your stories are head and shoulders above almost al of them and never exceeded by any.
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A novel idea and a superb plot marred only by the fact the author tried to make it all about sexual dominance instead of allowing the finer points of the plot to dominate the narrative. It was well written and well edited and if only the author had worked the main plot instead of allowing it to be taken over by sex to the detriment of the overall presentation..
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What a nice feeling to be safely ensconced at home. Kent is winding down but it may take some time. Same home, same family, every thing is right with the world. Nice chapter written well as usual. Thank you Tony.
