Renee Stevens
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Though this story is fiction, I think this chapter captures the need we all have for human interaction in one form or another. As unhappy as he was with his situation, he felt better, more wanted after he was no longer ignored. Good job in capturing this facet of human behavior.
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Ok, well, I decided not to listen to you and read this one anyways, so !!! Anyways, the first chapter is good, very dark and leaves the reader wondering what is going to happen as the story progresses.
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I really enjoyed reading this story. It was both entertaining and yet serious at the same time, which is a hard line to walk. You did a great job and I agree that adopted kids should have access to anything that could affect them later in life. Medical records especially, since as you pointed out in your story, some diseases are genetic. It's an issue that probably doesn't get the notice that it should, but you're story put it out there. Thank you!
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I really liked this short story, especially how Matthew was determined to pay his own way rather than burden his mother with his expenses. I think this story is a good example of doing what you have to do to get where you want to be. Thanks for the great read!
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I love this poem and how the emotions just leap off the page. Emotions are a hard thing to write about and I think that you did a beautiful job with this piece. You truly have a gift, being able to bring such strong emotions to your work. I look forward to reading many more works by you! Keep up the great work.
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I love all the emotion that you were able to weave into this poem. It really makes one stop and think. Both poems separate are a wonderful read, but read together it is that much more poignant. Thank you for sharing it!
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Really enjoyed this poem! The pictures that you paint with your words, whether in poetry or in your stories, are wonderful! Thanks hon for an enjoyable read!
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I loved it! Really don't know what to say other than this poem is so poignant and yet shrouded in mystery up until the end! Thank you for sharing hon!
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The Path
Renee Stevens commented on Renee Stevens's story in 2011 Poetry Anthology: Into the Unknown
Thank you so much for your kind words. I like to have some sort of structure, even if it's not immediately apparent what that might be. I'm glad that you enjoyed it! -
Thank you so much for reviewing! Yes, that's the end for these guys... I think I've put them through enough hell that it's time that they get their happy ending. Though they may appear in a later story, but won't necessarily be the focus of it. I try to watch the name thing, but occasionally it slips by me, and when I wrote this, I didn't have the totally awesome beta's that i have now! Thanks again for taking the time to review every chapter, it was great to see and read your thoughts as the story progressed!!!
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What can I say, I have to put my characters through hell for some reason.... so yeah, you're right, it's not over yet, but close! Thanks hon!
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Dang! First a damn you, now total bitch... lol... I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and that it is suspenseful enough to hold your attention! Thanks for the wonderful review!
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Woohoo! Not only did I get a "Ah HELL" but I got a "Damn you" too!!!! I love these scenes where Levi shows that he has a backbone! Thanks hon!
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They are pretty likeable, ain't they Thanks hon!
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Originally, when I started this story, I didn't plan on bringing the agents into it, but as the story evolved, it just seemed to be a nice twist to add... Glad it's working! Thanks for the review hon!
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Thanks Nephy! I felt the need for something a bit more lighthearted after the scene with Christian... I think bastard is too nice a word when it comes to describing Christian, lol... Glad you are enjoying the story!!
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My opinion on Christian is... PSYCHO!!!!! but that's just me! Thanks for the review!!
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Thanks Nephy! I really did not like that woman, but she was a necessary evil in the story!
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Thanks Nephy! Right now I think they both have it pretty bad... Blaine for thinking he has to leave, and Levi for being the one who was left... Not to mention everything else going on... Levi really doesn't seem the type to just give up on something he wants, lol...
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I hope that is interesting in a good way... I wanted to show how sometimes we are focused so many on one thing that we ignore everything around us. Thanks for the review!
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Illusions of the Future
Renee Stevens commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in Illusions of the Future
Thanks for the review Maria... I was in a bit of a dark place when I wrote this poem... Basically just writing out thoughts and then rearranging them into the poem. -
Thank you Maria! I don't usually write much poetry, so I never am really sure on what will come of it! Glad you liked it and that it gave you cause to think!
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Would I leave my readers on a cliff?? LOL.. Yep, I would and do! I agree with you about the quote! Thanks for the review!
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Thanks Nephy! Unless I already went in and fixed it, I couldn't find where it was that I called Blaine "Levi".... Yeah, I really really don't like Christian!
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I know what you mean, I have been worried about that as well. It may be something that I look into a bit more when I start doing the revisions. Thanks Nephy!
