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Renee Stevens

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  1. Simon gazed around him at what had once been the barren area of the house that had been Richard’s living room. Since moving in a little over a week before, he had added small touches through the house to make it look more lived in. He gave a small smile as his gaze moved to the pictures that now adorned the walls. He hoped that Richard would be home soon, he had left a couple days before to handle a case but hadn’t confided in Simon exactly what the case was about. Simon wasn’t overly worrie
  2. Renee Stevens

    Chapter 4

    Thanks for the review! I went back and fixed the spot you were talking about. Thanks so much for pointing it out to me. I thought I had gotten all of them, but must have missed that one! Hope you continue to enjoy the story!
  3. Renee Stevens

    Chapter 4

    Blaine knew that he had been a coward in not being at the camp when Levi got back, but he just didn’t know what to say to the man. He had known that there was an attraction between him and Levi but he had never expected to act on that attraction. His thoughts were jumbled and he didn’t know where to start to organize his thoughts. He looked down to where Ruff trotted at his side and berated himself for running like some scared little girl. “What do you think Ruff; you think we should hea
  4. I agree with you! I love how both of them are so uncertain with where they stand with the other, but at the same time the love between them is apparent to the reader. Kinda makes me think of the "does he, doesn't he" that teenagers go through when they like something.
  5. I really wish I could give you a difinitive answer to your questions, but I can't without giving the rest of the story away, and then what would be the fun of that? All I can really say is that there is plenty more to come for both Richard and Simon and by the time all is said and done, you should have the answers to your questions! And what would a story be without at least a little bit of angst? *grin* Thank you so much for reading and I hope to hear from you again soon!
  6. Renee Stevens

    Chapter 3

    It is very warming to hear that you are willing to read this story again! Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know that you are enjoying it!
  7. Renee Stevens

    Chapter 2

    Poor Rabbie . Loving the story so far and I am looking forward to seeing where it goes! Definitely interested more in Somhlth and exactly what part he's going to play in the story! Well done!
  8. Richard felt his heart lightening as he stepped out of the car outside of Simon’s townhouse. His last case of a kidnapped little girl had been heart wrenching. The authorities had held out little hope for the little girl’s safe return when Richard had become involved in the case. It had taken the better part of a week before he had found the girl and reunited her with her family. He made his way up the walk, a smile curving up his lips as Simon opened the door before he had even knocked.
  9. Renee Stevens

    Chapter One

    Thank you for the review Red! I'm so glad to read that you enjoyed the story and that the story flowed like I wanted it to. Thank you so much for reading and I hope that you continue to enjoy my work.
  10. Just read Chapter One and I'm really enjoying the story so far. Can't wait to see what happens with the two princes. You've got me curious as to exactly what the gods plans are for Mahai.
  11. Renee Stevens

    Chapter 3

    Pulling up in front of his own camp, Blaine unloaded the pup before unloading the supplies that he had bought. After setting up the Kennel, Blaine grabbed the open can of dog food and poured a small amount in the dish before setting it in front of the pup. He hated to see how the pup wolfed the food down, proving again how starved he was. Grabbing the brush that he’d bought, Blaine walked over and sat in his chair before calling the pup over to him and picking it up. Running the brush thro
  12. Simon stood at the door and studied Richard as he grilled up steaks on the outer grill. It had been a good couple of months, but his mind had been in turmoil ever since Richard had mentioned changing him. He’d seen the despair in Richard’s eyes whenever he thought he was unobserved and it tore at his heart. It had never been brought up again, but he knew that neither of them had forgotten, it just wasn’t talked about. “Why are you looking so serious?” Richard asked as he flipped Simon’s stea
  13. Renee Stevens

    Chapter 1

    Haha! I get to be the first to review this story! Woohoo! Anyways, love the first chapter Cia! I definitely can feel for Rabbie and want to know what happens with him! *Sigh* why is it always the first born who has to have all the responsibilities?? I know that's the way it really was, but when there's another son, the eldest should really be able to abdicate if he wants to! Great Job!
  14. In the end it's really up to you, but as a reader I much prefer a scene to be finished. Unless of course it's a cliffhanger that's done on purpose. In most of my own stories I don't worry so much about chapter length as about how the chapter flows. Just my two cents!
  15. Renee Stevens

    Story

    I read this when the first anthology came out and I enjoyed it just as much then as I did this time. Thank you for a read!
  16. As soon as Simon had pulled away in the Jeep, Richard had stripped out of his clothes and left them in a niche in a tree before shifting. He had learned to love the feeling of his muscles contorting as they became those of his wolf. Coarse jet black hair pushed through his skin as his hands and feet turned to large paws. His legs and arms contorted into four well muscled limbs. His face contorted into a long muzzle full of sharp teeth, ears becoming pointy and set towards the top of his skul
  17. I'm not even going to get into all the accusations being thrown at the Admins, Mods, and Tech people here. I just thought to point out the simple fact that the only reason that GA is here that those I already mention put a lot of time and effort into keeping a site running that you don't have to pay to post to. They are offering a free service, with the option to support the site by paying for a premium membership. Nobody made them offer a site for authors to post on, but yet they still do. Being a hosted/promising author is a privilege, not a right, for those who post their stories on the site. I for one just want to thank the entire GA staff for all the work they have put into the site and for ALLOWING me to post my stories!
  18. It's okay to call me a little bit evil... I'll even admit to it on this chapter. *Wonders if there will be an more cliffhangers in this story* *evil grin*
  19. It wouldn't have been near as fun if Richard had seen it coming! At least they both got what they wanted in the end!
  20. Thanks for the review Frostina!!! I can't imagine myself in that position either, I mean... I would hope that I would handle it as well as Simon does. I have loved Richard from the time I started writing this story... In my mind I see him as a protector and I love how the scene's in this story show that.
  21. Renee Stevens

    Chapter 2

    Thanks Cia! Yeah, the emotions definitely run the gauntlet! I never really thought about the fact that both Blaine and the dog are homeless, guess I probably should have though, lol... Thanks for pointing out the change of pov, I didn't really noticed it, but if it's not distracting then I won't worry about it too much for now!
  22. Renee Stevens

    Chapter 2

    Thanks Jon! There is a lot more still to come so I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story as well!
  23. Withering away while dying inside, Wondering what’s going to be. How to fight a losing battle, When the outcome is so bleak. Some days are better than others, Most are covered in a thick black cloud. Memories fight to be remembered, Maybe that’s all that will ever be. Despair is a constant companion, While trudging through the sludge. The truth doesn’t set one free, Only heaps more burdens upon the shoulders. Claws tearing at the walls of happiness, Determi
  24. This story was a bit different but definitely enjoyable... I especially loved the bits to do with the "sparklies"! Well done
  25. Renee Stevens

    Chapter 1

    Awwwwww, thanks Cia!!! Glad you are enjoying it during the re-read!! As far as Christian... you and me both.. though there are some people I'd like to do that to in real life, but unfortunately, I'm just not a vindictive person.. *sigh*
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