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Hi Kevin! Thanks so much for taking the time to comment!! I loved Mark while writing this story, he seemed to be the best friend that everyone should have! Look forward to hearing more from you!
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Chapter 3: Surprise Attack
Renee Stevens commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 3: Surprise Attack
Really enjoyed this chapter! I like how you ended it with Bashta wishing his father was there to give him guidance and the scene at the river, with Piscel moving so quickly away brought a smile to my face. You really show how Bashta is growing as a character and how his feelings towards Cavel continue to build. Great job and can't wait for another chapter! -
In a hotel room, over a hundred miles away, Christian sat and thought back over the day. His plan would have worked out perfectly if Blaine’s fuck toy hadn’t caused him to run off the road. He didn’t know how he was going to continue on his plan, but he knew he’d find a way. The cops couldn’t keep Blaine and Levi under surveillance forever, and the second they stopped, Christian would be there. Flopping down on the bed, Christian started flipping through the folder that was sitting next to
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A Challenge Accepted
Renee Stevens commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in A Challenge Accepted
Hey Sam!! Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed the short look into their lives. -
Bippity-Boppity-Boo or How Charming Fell For Cinder
Renee Stevens commented on Lugh's story chapter in Bippity-Boppity-Boo or How Charming Fell For Cinder
You already know my opinion on this story, but I'll restate it here for the enjoyment of other readers! Plus, reviews are always a good thing, right? I really enjoyed reading this version of the "Cinderella" story. I think one of my favorite parts was the androids! Though you got the evil stepmother and step-sisters down perfectly! I also enjoyed the fact that through the whole story, "Cinder" thought he was a girl, and we only actually found out the truth after the "ball". My only complaint with this story is I wish it was longer, but then again, I generally don't like stories I enjoy to end. Great work Lugh! -
A Challenge Accepted
Renee Stevens commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in A Challenge Accepted
Thanks for the review Lugh!!! I'm glad I was able to give you a laugh!! I am trying to expand my repertoire ... Next! -
Levi slumped in one of the corner booths of the small café as he waited for Blaine to pull up. He wasn’t sure where Christian was at the moment and he was scared spit-less that he was going to show up looking for him. Levi had never been so happy to be in a car wreck as he had been that morning. Glancing back out the window, Levi felt his heart start pounding in his chest when he seen Mark’s truck pull into the parking lot, followed by a police cruiser. He hadn’t been sure at first if Blaine
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A Challenge Accepted
Renee Stevens commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in A Challenge Accepted
That sound SO familiar. We do this all the time - Jerry sounds easy - is he cute. Some how I expected the 'challenge' would last longer - on and Chris is a bit of a putz - did he REALLY have to say - I was making what you asked anyway? Thanks Thanks for the review Andy! Know what you mean, though with us it's I'll ask the hubby what he want's to eat and he'll tell me "food" followed by "edible food"... grrrrrr.. lol... Jerry is cute in my head, both of them are . As far as the challenge lasting longer, I originally planned on it lasting the whole day, but was afraid that poor Jerry would end up all bruised up before the end! -
A Challenge Accepted
Renee Stevens commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in A Challenge Accepted
LOL! Thanks Maria! When I was writing it I was sitting here imagining the looks, lol. *wonders what the hubby would do if I tried this* -
A Challenge Accepted
Renee Stevens commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in A Challenge Accepted
Thanks for the review Stu!!! I debated so much on this story as it's not what I usually write and I wasn't sure what kind of a reception it would get. And yeah, having a "Chris" is good, but sometimes a pain in the butt! -
A Challenge Accepted
Renee Stevens commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in A Challenge Accepted
Thanks for the review Frosty! The bubble wrap idea came from my hubby. He's always saying how accident prone I am and is constantly trying to sneak a roll of bubble wrap into the cart at Wal-Mart. I'm really glad you enjoyed this story! -
Awesome story Frosty!!! It's amazing how you captured the differences between the two brothers and the ending. Wow! I'm sure I'll come up with a better response after a while, but as for now I am at a loss for words! Great story hon and I hope to get to read a lot more from you! Also, thanks for giving Eric and Jordy a happy ending
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Great Story Lugh! I love the world that you portray in these stories and I am so glad that you share them with us! It Was A Holy Day kept me on the edge of my seat as I wait to see what happens to each of your characters! I am especially glad that Rix now knows what happened with his "Bound" and I hope his brother is ready for what is going to happen when Rix gets a hold of him! I'm looking forward to reading more by you!
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Love the story Cia... I especially liked how you had Joey yell for Danny to run. I think this shows a strength of character that he was concerned for Danny more than what would happen to him. I also like how in return, Danny got him help. This was a very touching and sometimes troubling story and as always, you have managed to bring a uniqueness to your work! Thanks for the great read!
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A Challenge Accepted
Renee Stevens commented on Renee Stevens's story chapter in A Challenge Accepted
Thanks Cia! This story was exceedingly different from any others that I've written and am looking forward to seeing how it received by everyone else. I know what you mean about folks acting like fools and can agree completely! Thanks for the review! -
Hi Rakuten~ I'll think about the story thing, but I also figured I'd point you in the direction of Lugh's story "Shout it Out"... Just ignore the bright colors! https://www.gayauthors.org/story/lugh/shoutitout ~Renee
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Nope, they can't, just wait until future chapters, you may really hate me then! lol.. Glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for the review!
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Blaine hated to take Mark’s truck, but it was the only working vehicle and Blaine knew that he needed to leave. Throwing his stuff into the bed of the truck, Blaine wrenched the door open and climbed in. He was thankful to see that Mark had left the keys in the ignition. He chanced a last look at the house as he started the truck up and wasn’t really surprised when the front door opened and Levi walked out. Afraid he would break down; Blaine threw the truck in reverse and pressed down on the
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Chapter 2: Back and Forth
Renee Stevens commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 2: Back and Forth
Poor Bashta! I can't even imagine how hard it would be to learn to socialize again after so long of being alone. I am looking forward to seeing how Cavel helps Bashta overcome his shyness. Looking forward to reading more about these two! -
Simon groaned as he levered himself up from the hard floor of the cave. He would never again take having an actual bed for granted. After all of the excitement of the previous night he had managed to sleep until late morning and his mind was focused on what was going to happen later that night. He glanced around the spacious cave as he waited for Richard’s towering figure to walk through the entrance. He was a bit nervous about what was going to happen but knew that it was what he wante
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Blaine smiled at the wonderful aroma coming from the kitchen when he walked in the front door of Levi’s house. The past two weeks had gone amazingly well and he was more rested than he’d been at any other time in his life. Making his way into the kitchen, Blaine went unnoticed and silently watched as Levi stirred something on the stove. Walking up behind him, Blaine wrapped his arms around Levi from behind. ”Hi honey, I’m home,” Blaine whispered in Levi’s ear, smiling when Levi turned aro
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Chapter 1: Invaded Territory
Renee Stevens commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 1: Invaded Territory
Thank you for allowing me to be a part of bringing this wonderful world to life! The worlds you can create with your words are amazing and I look forward to each and every story from you. The fact that I get to play a small part in bringing them to life is like icing on the cake! With that said, I love the dedication that Cavel has to his clan as well as Bashta's compassion once he knows what Cavel is there for. The both seem to be very strong and loyal men. They are both loyal to their clan and to their duties and that is something to respect and admire. -
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“Damn it!” Jerry rubbed his forehead where he’d just smacked into the edge of the open door. He whirled around at the sound of laughter behind him and tripped over his own feet at the movement, ending up sprawled on the floor. “Maybe you should try walking backwards, at least then you’d have a reason for running into things and falling over your own feet.” Chris, his long-time boyfriend, continued to laugh as he reached down to pull him to his feet. “You think so, do you?” Jerry scowled,
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Jerry is a klutz. His boyfriend Chris has reminded him of the fact one too many times, driving Jerry to set out to prove him wrong. Will he succeed or just prove Chris right?
