Renee Stevens
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Cia, I loved this little story. I think we all try to give reasons for why we do what we do and thinking that there are little people in our head manipulating us makes me say, see, it's not my fault. Lol... Great Dribble
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Yeah, that was my favorite line in that chapter. I appreciate the thought you put into that PM... it gave me some stuff to think about! Hugs!
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LOL, thanks for the review! Yeah, they did have that, but I felt it worked at the time. For me and my hubby we were moved in together after 2 months, lol... And no, I don't write looking down the side of a mountain, but you have to admit, it had you looking forward to the next chapter! Now, just imagine if you'd had to wait to read the next chapter, lol.
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Thanks hon! Yeah, I like Mark and was hoping that their friendship came across as "real"... I think it just shows that there's not much Blaine can surprise him with. Thanks!
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Thank you for the review Andy! I always worry about the flow of the story and I'm glad that it is flowing so well. I would hate to be either one of the guys here. I can feel for both of them but there is still so much more to come for them, they just don't realize it yet!
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Yes, Levi does have gumption. I see him as the guy who goes after what he wants and doesn't give up easily. The thing I like best about the puppy is that it makes Blaine realize that someone (even if it is a dog) is worse off than he is. He can relate with the pup even if it does surprise him. And yeah, Levi being a vet did make things easier, though sometimes I wonder if that's just too "convenient"
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Thanks for your review Andy! I just figured why not jump in with both feet on this story. And no, Blaine hasn't been around much, but he'll find a way, somehow.
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Renee Stevens commented on Renee Stevens's story in 2011 - Summer - Walk on the Wild Side
Thanks for the review Cia!!! Yeah, the bubble wrap thing with Jerry is definitely warranted. I did put a bit of time into this and I'm glad that it shows, but then again, you got to listen to me gripe about this story, along with Lugh. I think Jerry could bump into many of us and we wouldn't mind, but of course, he had to bump into the one who would!!! -
Thanks for the review Sam! I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed seeing the boys again and thank you for the compliment!!!
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Thanks for the review comic! Yeah, Jerry is a bit accident prone, but he's such a lovable character!! I love the way you phrased it though "cute but a total disaster". That just fits so well!!! As for Chris.. Yeah, he's going to have a lot of tests, but, he does it cause loves him. They do go together well and I'm sure the rest of their night was a lot better than the way it had gone so far... hmmmmm... guess maybe I should have wrote the rest of their night, but... nah, it was more fun that way!
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Thanks for the review hon! How did you know that? Even I didn't know that when I wrote the first one! Oh well, they still have so many stories to tell so I'm sure you'll be seeing more of them. As for favorites, I can't pick one in these stories, I love both the guys equally.
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Thank you for the review! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this story! As far as the clumsiness, I know the feeling. I'm always injuring myself, tripping, etc... in fact, earlier today me and the hubby were at walmart and he saw a guy carrying a roll of bubble wrap and made sure to point it out!
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More bubble wrap? Whatever would make you think that? LOL... I've never really copped to the idea that like people always pair together and I think Jerry and Chris show that. As for my hubby... well... I'll just let you keep wondering about that... hehehe. Thanks for your comments hon!!
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Thanks for the review Stu! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and yeah, Jerry has a bit of a childlike joy, which means that Chris has to play the part of adult, lol...
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Hmmmmmm... didn't think about the name thing, but no, it's not THE Kyle. I don't see Chris as stuffy, but that's just me... I just see him as just knowing that things aren't going to bode well and so he's a bit more reserved than Jerry is. Thanks for the review hon!
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Thanks for the review Nephy! Yeah, I love these guys and I feel for Chris, but what's a guy supposed to do. LOL... Life with Jerry boring??? Never!!! hehehe
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No, he really can't, but he makes a great character for lots of different stories. It's his own little quirk and there are so many different ways it can be explored! Thanks for the review Frosty and yes, I'm sure it was worth it
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Sam~ I never did believe when you said you were better to just stick to poetry and this story just proves that. Thanks for a great read! Hugs
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Well, I've read this a couple times as you were working on it. I love how you have painted Mia and that she got Valdorn and Kismet mixed up. If she knew the truth, Valdorn is who she wanted and now that he knows the truth about her, she'd never even have a chance. Also, the way she has been painted opened the door for Kismet and Taloric. I love that pairing and I think you did a wonderful job of building that relationship. There are so many great things I could say about this story, but you know a lot of my thoughts on it and if you have any questions on what I thought, all ya gotta do is ask me! Great read hon!
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I think my favorite part of this was the interaction between Derrick & Jerry. Thanks
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I've already given you most of my comments privately, so all I'm going to say here is that I love that he came up with the courage to get away. Hugs hon!
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Loved this story. I think my favorite part was the last dare. I really liked how Sean finally really put his foot down and it made Mark take notice of him and think twice about what he was about to do. The other thing, I enjoyed how you captured that moment when you're underwater after jumping in... everything's a bit disoriented and it takes a second to know which way to go. Great story!
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I absolutely loved this story. Because of the name, I wondered who was the archangel, but wasn't overly surprised when it was Alex. Only because of the way he talked about "inside". It did throw me for a loop when it was revealed that both Trevor and Nick were angels though and through me for even more of a loop when it was revealed that Nick is an archangel. Look forward to the full length story regarding these characters! Great Job Andy!
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This was a great read Andy and I would definitely be interested in reading more about these characters. Up until the actual Kenard showed up, I didn't realize that it was actually Marcus fighting, though, like Cia, I wondered how he was doing the magic. That was a great twist. I had just figured that Kenard was calling Marcus, not the other way around. Maybe it was just me, but I hadn't realized until that kiss that Kenard and Marcus were a couple... So hopefully that's how it was meant and I wasn't just being dense! Great job hon!
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Thank you so much for all the reviews Andy. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story and found the ending to be the right one. I hate ending stories, simply because I have a really hard time letting my characters go. These two guys really got to me, and so did Matt. Might be why there are two more stories for these guys. Though, just an FYI, if you decided to read them, Matt's story is a M/F story. Thank you again!!!
