Renee Stevens

Herm... then I have no idea. Oh... on another note @Mikie , don't yell at me.

*hold Mikie in a bear hug* @Hunter Thomson I'd strongly suggest, when you're awake, laying on your bed and rolling around. Just to be double sure, because it's entirely possible that the weight of you laying on the bed could be pushing a broken spring out and scratching you as you move around. I could be wrong, and you might feel weird rolling around on your bed slowly, but there's got to be something causing it.

LOL @ the wit comment. Could there be a broken spring or something in your mattress? Something like that maybe?

No, it's not. I get scratches, but those are from Sully deciding it's time for me to wake up.

What he said!

I'm crossing my fingers that things start looking up for you, hon!

@Hunter Thomson Oh wow, I just looked it up! There are actually recipes for Wine Bread!

Awwwww... I'm sorry your stressing hon! And no, I don't think bread is typically supposed to smell like wine, but hey, might as well enjoy it

It was. It was so nice! You probably wouldn't believe me when I said that we had to wait two days to go camping because the road to get to where we were going to camp was CLOSED because of SNOW!

Well, you need to live closer!!! OMG, you wouldn't believe the view last time:

Eh, this and that, lol. Got into GRL so I'm way excited about that. And then just camping for the most part.

date like things are always good!

So, what has everyone been up to? Anything fun?

I'm doing pretty good. Still trying to do the writing thing, but I'm way excited for October!

Hunter!!!! Long time no talk to!

LOL. You'd better!

Of course!!! Even if I'm not around, I expect an email. I can go not too far from camp and get service.

Mikie!! I know, I just wish it was

I really need it to be Tuesday, then I'm back on vacation, and maybe I'll have my focus back to write!

Is it Tuesday yet?!

Missing the chat room? Want a place to chat with other members? Well, here ya go!

tim, after almost two weeks off from the blog, my days are all messed up and posts have been late, lol. And I'm leaving again on Tuesday or Wednesday for another week. Summer brings a lot of camping for me and the hubby

Sorry all, once again I'm running a little behind schedule. Before we get into the wrap up, don't forget to check out the stories for the Take Two noun game from the newsletter! It was a busy week this week, so let's take a look. And this time, I think we're going to go backwards! Contests Halloween Short Story Contest - Due September 15th, 2017 Anthology Announcements: ***NOTE: All Deadlines are for submission to the Anthology Proof Team 2017 Fall Anthology: The Fall Out / Secret Spaces - Due November 15th, 2017 Premium Updates: Dreams of a Father by dkstories; Book 2 of Dreams of Humanity *Premium* Negative Splits by Cia *Premium* Classic Updates: Dreams of a Father by dkstories; Book 2 of Dreams of Humanity Reggie's Journal by Ronyx Zoiks! a test by Myr Signature Updates: Aditus' prompts and circumstances by aditus Caesura by aditus; Book 2 of The King's Mate Mine! by Cia Negative Splits by Cia The Castaway Hotel: Next Generation Book 2 by Bill W; Book 11 of The Castaway Hotel Promising Updates: Buy One, Get Two and Three... by Caz Pedroso Lyrical Laments by Headstall Poems, Old and New by Caz Pedroso Ripped by craftingmom The Watcher: Part Two... Beginnings by Headstall timmy's poetry by Mikiesboy Walls by Carlos Hazday; Book 6 of CJ

Sorry y'all for the prompts being late. My days are all messed up and I completely spaced that today was Friday. Don't forget to share your prompt responses in the forum and if it's under 1,000 words, it must be posted as part of a collection. Now, let's see what comicfan has for us today. Prompt 582 – Creative Tag – First Line How can I tell him about the accident, when I can’t even keep it together? Prompt 583 – Creative Tag – Lonely Hearts Your mother is tired of seeing you alone and she wants grandchildren. Without your knowledge she hires a matchmaker. What is your match like? Since there were no takers on last week's prompts, how about everyone share a random prompt response with us? Pull up your prompt responses, close your eyes, and point. Whichever prompt response you point to, that's the one you share with us!

A critique doesn't just have to be criticism. It can also be another word for a review, or a detailed analysis. I mean, think of a food critic, they focus on both positive and negatives of whatever they are reviewing/critiquing.