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How many can we fit in the hammock?
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errancy
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throb
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Great ghost tale. I, too, would liked to have known more about the ghost's story (hehehe). Great characters and storyline surprises.
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What a horrifying and sad tale you created and, at times, it was difficult to read. It's hard to imagine someone coming out whole at the other end, but I know people do in real life. Your comment "Gabriel is stronger than he thinks but everyone gets tired and when you do it means everything to have a strong pair of arms around you and a shoulder to rest your head on" came across in your story because that's the impression I got about Gabriel & Mikey as I read it. Thanks for the happy ending.
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What a great read. It felt like Bourne Identity meets Misery but with its own suspense and twists and very resilient protagonist. The abuse was alarming and chilling... the lengths people will go to get what they want **shiver** without considering self sacrifice. I thoroughly enjoyed it and couldn't read fast enough to find out how it would end.
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If we're going to the beach again, can we go someplace tropical?
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ultimo
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COVEN Current open venue encourages naturists VENUE
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centaurea
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Radical environmental noises teeters sanity LLSSY
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LUMBER Little urges might be eventual rituals ESTEL
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PRANK People rarely acknowledge nooner kinks. KINKS
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I agree with ckprime, WOW! I loved everything about this story. The story line was great, from Parker's journey to Pike's history to the final revelations. Fantasy, mystery and reality mixed together with great characters.
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Beautiful, wonderful, sweet and touching. I just loved Soulmates. Alex and Jeremy had quite a journey through heartache and separation on so many different levels. You made us hate the bad characters and love the good ones. And the story between James and Jeremy, so sad. Great job.
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I loved this story and all its components - characters, story flow and concept, love, hate, magic ... ! Fantasy sci-fi is my favorite genre anyway, but that doesn't make any difference when reading this story. Its just a fun read.
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I loved the story. Great characters, story and emotional ups and downs of all the characters. You kept me guessing as to how it would all come together, especially with the Mom's over-the-top reaction. I liked the twist of not a complete happy ending but an ending that most of the characters (a little worried about dad) could live with.
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For someone who claims he's straight, Tristan sure fell hard for Abe. I'm glad you added "a year and a bit more later" glimpse into the future to let us know how and what they were doing. Good story!
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What a sweet tale of two people finding their way to each other while each are willing to sacrifice themselves for the other yet misunderstanding each others actions and feelings. Friendship and love crossing class barriers.
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What a great little snippet from your life. I'm so glad you've have an accepting and loving circle of family and friends. Support from those close to you can make many things bearable. It's a sad world since that is not the case for everyone.
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What a very touching look at the pain and love in your life. I'm so sorry about your debilitating pain but very happy you have someone in your life that cares so much. I wish you well. Soft hugs
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Don't you just love a happy ending, especially with a little mystery magic thrown in. Wonderful story of belief and hope. Well done!
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[Andrew_Q_Gordon] Purpose
Suz replied to Andrew Q Gordon's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
Oh, good. This is one of my conclusions based on the reasons you stated... and the conclusion I liked the best. In my review I stated maybe David didn't die when I meant Ryan. Thanks for the spoiler and a great story. -
A wonderful story dealing with loss and rememberance of a member from a loving family. Well done. Loved the tie between your title, the father's medal achievement and the man he became.
