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  1. Great story and character development. Good finding out more about Luc and Sven. We await further encounters between Nos and Cal. But Im intrigued by Emon and his somewhat feeble attempt to rein back Orion's assault on Nos. Or am I reading something into something that isn't there?
  2. sandeman

    Chapter 13

    Love that it was Ronan who helped Lucas change. Then the image of a ball of fluff humping the other runt was hilarious. These two together are going to dominate in fifty years time but I'm sure you are going to get a lot of mileage out of them whilst they are both pups.
  3. sandeman

    Prologue

    Late to this story but loving it and all the comments. Does anyone know anywhere in the UK other than Leamington where I can buy this "glitter"?
  4. sandeman

    Chapter 13

    Late to this site but thank you Topher Lydon for referring me from your latest saga to the Charlie series. Cannot wait to start on the next story. Amazing inventive mind creating amazing fantasy.
  5. Jack is a child of the moon and of the sun, of night and day, quicksilver, " not the most patient child and his insecurities...". His dream of a future Theo and his restored pack is disturbing him for he is not included. He is forgotten or never has been. But that is but one future. His longing is to to have that future with Theo, who with the intervention of Lady Moon is now following the path that his heart has now recognised, towards the one without whom there can be no future.
  6. sandeman

    Chapter 12

    Yet again my mind has reached its overload point with all the images you conjure up. I don't know where laughter ends and joyous crying begins. Were I 70 years younger I might be doing cartwheels in the garden! I can't pick out one highlight from so many in this episode so I'll just go along with the sheriff. "All in all, it was a solid night for the local authorities."
  7. sandeman

    Chapter 11

    Oh my! Absolutely fantastic to have the previous cbapter to be seen from another side. And great fun that they have misread Marty's pack. Ronan and Buzzcut ( or should that be Buzzcock) are I'm sure going to give great pleasure in future episodes. And as for the new pack I cannot wait to read what joys there are in store when they find out they are " poking a sleeping dragon with a very short, very fragile stick". Andy in full power defending Lucas has got to be glorious.!
  8. The philospher John Stuart Mill " Bad men need nothing more to compass their ends, than that good men should look on and do nothing". Sadly most of us are guilty. Your writing is inspirational . If only the love at Two Spirits were to be found everywhere .....
  9. So, two more gay couples to enter their spiritual and possibly physical home. Bass and Kidd (Jake was a bit slow on the uptake there!). And now Matt brings with him a local boy, Reed, the guy who has already shown his concern and willingness to help Jake and Mannly. Await the explosive reaction when his Mommie Dearest and sister Shayne find out! And I'm sure they will stir up the rest of the bigots in the area. And though I do not hold with guns I understand the need for protection. Bigotry has always engendered violence, and it has usually been aimed at those unable or unwilling to fight back.
  10. sandeman

    Chapter 10

    Wowee! I was all set to make some silly comment about exploding rabbits when suddenly EVERYTHING blew up!!
  11. sandeman

    Chapter 6

    " I think I understand wanting to keep the thing you love close enough to reach without having to explain why". The point at which they both began to reach out, if not yet fully comprehending the feelings developing between them. Love the tours of Augustan Rome.
  12. sandeman

    Trail Legs

    A lovely chapter. I have just read a short story by sf/fantasy writer Michael Moorcock called The Time Traveller published 60 years ago. And a quote from it " Yet still he yearned to go there and see if he could find some trace of what he needed - though he would only know what he needed when he found it."
  13. sandeman

    Chapter 9

    Oh my god! Out in the garden today. A neighbourhood cat ( why can't they do their business in their own yards?) chased a squirrel up a tree! I don't know whether I'm in heaven or hell! Vampire, werewolf, squirrel or cat ? I think after reading this episode I am exhausted and need to lie down in a darkened room with a damp cloth on my forehead and contemplate immortality or should that be immorality? From where do you get your inspiration? Don't let it ever fail.
  14. sandeman

    Chapter 8

    Whilst not as old as Andy or Bartholomew (just loving his appearance in this saga) I watched the first episode of Dr Who back in 1963 ( I was not a child nor even a teenager) and have been watching ever since. From the professorial dad William Hartnell to Ncuti Gatwa( be still my heart) for whom I had great expectations of further associatons with ( again be still my beating heart) Jonathan Groff's the Rogue. And despite all the furor surrounding him, the introduction of John Barrowman (bsmbh) as the gay Jack Harkness into Dr Who and spinoff Torchwood was inspirational). AN EVEN MORE FANTASTIC CHAPTER TODAY! So much to laugh aloud about. So much one could comment on given 6 months. BUT conpiratorial squirrels!! The next time a squirrel (grey sadly rather than the beautiful red), appears in my garden I shall with due deference stand and make obeisance. Just in case!
  15. sandeman

    Chapter 5

    Tempus omnia revelabit. Bonus, malus, perfidus.
  16. sandeman

    Chapter 5

    Ita est. At cave, Marce. Donum Arminii Ingemarus est. Donumne verum an falsum erit?
  17. sandeman

    Chapter 5

    Vague memories of Rome's expansion into Germania made me too check further. O Marce, time Germanos et Arminium donum ferentem. God, to have had access to the net for Latin 70 years ago!!
  18. sandeman

    Day Five

    On a much smaller scale than this beautiful narrative, a poem recollected from amongst many learned over 80 years. Tewkesbury Road by John Masefield. "it is good to be out on the road, and going one knows not where, Going through meadow and village, one knows not whither or why."
  19. sandeman

    Day Five

    We have all suffered from our first pair of walking boots! The blister and plaster seems to explain Oliver's life. Cover pain with a plaster. It makes it bearable but it doesnt take the pain away. Oliver's pilgrimage is not just to get to a destination but to give himself the chance to change. Its not necessarily the destination that's important but the journey itself.
  20. sandeman

    Chapter 5

    "....duty and desire fitting neatly into a single life..." Two young men whose attraction to each other is obvious for they share similar tastes and feelings. It is good for Marcus that there is empathy between the two for he will have to rely on the more experienced Ingomar when they face wilder trials in Germania.
  21. A beautiful episode. Three men delighting in each other. Henry " was not going anywhere ". Nor am I!
  22. sandeman

    Chapter 6

    This is my book before bedtime! I have been told I laugh in my sleep. From pantomimes onward at the age of 5. If I manage to stop laughing now at 11.30 pm I am sure to be chuckling when I am asleep. That aside all I can do is echo Ruth's "Oh, my God" . And find a church to go to on Sunday to pray for the continuance of this story for ever and ever. Amen.
  23. Again the ranch closes round to protect Mannly. Recovery from PTSD is difficult and Mannly is getting there but slowly. The stink of the "Skunk" has brought back the horror of that night. Hopefully Mannly's nightmares will not recur; but Jake will be there to hold him if they do. Homophobia has never gone away. Sadly it seems to be on the rise.
  24. Beautiful. Great banter between the brothers, although Cameron isn't aware of who Ryan has been sexting - that could be cause for FUN when he finds out. And the sex between Ryan and Marcus was satisfying for them . Between them the brothers will ensure Marcus comes to terms with the pain he still experiences from Sean's death.
  25. sandeman

    Chapter 1

    Just a delightful short and tall story. Loved it.
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