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  1. itgilman

    Chapter 11

    Apart from this being a very entertaining and well written story, what I like about Iomax’s approach to writing on this site, is that he publishes regularly. So often here, writers start well, then there are long gaps or complete abandonment. Very often the reader has lost the thread of what’s happened and has to go back and catch up. I do understand that creativity doesn’t always flow to order, but perhaps waiting to publish until one has built up a substantial body of a story might be a better approach. Bravo, Iomax.
  2. I have been an avid reader of this story since the outset, and was really enjoying it. However, for the past couple of months the narrative seems to have lost direction. Chapter 128 is a good example. What was the point? So, is it simply that you can’t decide how to bring things to a conclusion, or is there a grand plan? Interested also to know if any other readers feel this way. I do actually enjoy most of Dodger’s writing, and felt that this story had a clear impetus for the first one hundred chapters. Also like the initial chapters of his other story - The Church? But recently I’ve bee
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    Chapter 19

    I so agree with the comments above. I get fed up with writers who begin well and then either lose interest, or events conspire to prevent them from taking the story further. How much better to write the story in advance, and then post regularly, not necessarily every day as this author does, but at least once a week. This would also have the advantage of providing an opportunity for writers to review their work as a whole before posting, and to avoid inconsistencies or mistakes. Plus it might prevent them from just going on and on, and more or less ruining the tightness of the plot. There are
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    That's fine for you, Jim, but not all of us readers are from the USA.
  5. Really enjoying this story! Thanks a lot. Love the 50s setting and details.
  6. Welcome to GA ~!!~

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