Love, love LOVE this story. I look forward to new chapters as much as I do Mark's Black Widow! I agree with Lisa...top three for sure! And just because I don't review every chapter doesn't mean I love it any the less. 118 chapters to go?

On 08/19/2015 06:20 AM, Coastguard said:

Love, love LOVE this story. I look forward to new chapters as much as I do Mark's Black Widow! I agree with Lisa...top three for sure! And just because I don't review every chapter doesn't mean I love it any the less. 118 chapters to go?

Thanks, as always, for your review Coastguard.

Yep, lots more to suffer through ...haha

Considering that the inspiration was a few overheard conversations by two boys on Mustang Isl. TX last September, it amazed me how the story just spun out of me for the next 6 or 7 months. But I'll keep my day job.

My text got cut off - power outage - but I wanted to congratulate you on how well you portray the conversations with all the characters present. Again, thanks for your writing, and please post more.

On 08/21/2015 01:09 AM, Parker Owens said:

My text got cut off - power outage - but I wanted to congratulate you on how well you portray the conversations with all the characters present. Again, thanks for your writing, and please post more.

Ha! Yes I thought that last one was a bit "terse" and thanks for the comment on conversation portrayal ...one of the things I found myself working on a lot while rewriting it 4000 times

Skinny!!!! I can't keep up with you! lol

I think I have like five chapters to catch up on! Wish I had an extra five hours during the day - I'd spend it reading about Twoey!

On 08/30/2015 01:19 PM, Lisa said:

Skinny!!!! I can't keep up with you! lol

 

I think I have like five chapters to catch up on! Wish I had an extra five hours during the day - I'd spend it reading about Twoey!

Oh wow!

Am I posting to fast or are you reading too slow? hehe.

I'm trying to keep up a twice a week pace. It's still gonna take forever to get to the end!

I found this story by accident recently, and I'm loving it! The balance between serious and humourous is perfect, IMO, and all the characters and their interaction is well done too. I know I should have been leaving comments but I blasted through the first few dozen chapters without stopping. I'll try to do better. I do hope you can finish this story - by my calculation there are a *lot* of chapters to go! ;-) Thanks for writing!

On 12/05/2015 07:50 AM, jess30519 said:

I found this story by accident recently, and I'm loving it! The balance between serious and humourous is perfect, IMO, and all the characters and their interaction is well done too. I know I should have been leaving comments but I blasted through the first few dozen chapters without stopping. I'll try to do better. I do hope you can finish this story - by my calculation there are a *lot* of chapters to go! ;-) Thanks for writing!

Oh WOW, thanks Jess! I'm so happy you found the story!

I'm even happier you like it so much.

There are 122 chapters in all. Don't worry, they're all written. Not finished, not polished, still under construction, but finished. You WILL see "The End" if you choose to stick with it - I promise.

I wouldn't mind having you leave a comment or two along the way. Don't be shy. Especially as there seems to be a bit of controversy brewing among some reviewers ...haha. But it's fun seeing them pick apart actions and motives. Join the fun!!

Okay, I'm not the only one who thought there might be something going on between Tommy's mother and PF. He was trying to calm her down, so wouldn't be that much of a stretch for him to do so with his mouth. Plus there was a few moments of alarm after his initial confusion. Perhaps he saw more of Tommy's mother and PF than he wanted to. I wonder who he would have taken the evidence to first.
Hopefully, he's safe. I mean, he was able to send off two text messages before going off the radar.
I do not like this cliffy. Not. At. All.
Also, I wonder how long Matty will wait before he tries showing Chuck the spot under the bleachers.
Wait! Doesn't David turn off his phone when he's meditating? Maybe he's asking Putin who best to turn this new information over to.

On 02/15/2016 05:01 PM, Dayne Mora said:

Okay, I'm not the only one who thought there might be something going on between Tommy's mother and PF. He was trying to calm her down, so wouldn't be that much of a stretch for him to do so with his mouth. Plus there was a few moments of alarm after his initial confusion. Perhaps he saw more of Tommy's mother and PF than he wanted to. I wonder who he would have taken the evidence to first.

Hopefully, he's safe. I mean, he was able to send off two text messages before going off the radar.

I do not like this cliffy. Not. At. All.

Also, I wonder how long Matty will wait before he tries showing Chuck the spot under the bleachers.

Wait! Doesn't David turn off his phone when he's meditating? Maybe he's asking Putin who best to turn this new information over to.

Whoops, I missed this dayne! It fell into the "story review" instead of ch 66.

By now you know all the answers, so there's no sense in trying to mislead you

Thanks for reviewing!!

Sad to see the recent posting, a talented writer of wonderful stories.