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Have you recently been electrocuted?? 🐿️
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I guess I never noticed that "therapist" and "the rapist" were the same spelling ha ha.
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Finally! Some gen-u-wine drama! None of this pussy-assed, 'oh no, he set an alarm off' crap! Seriously, thank you for another chapter. Three in the span of a week is great. I am a little disappointed that Ninja wasn't close enough to prevent Travis from getting hit. If they'd gone after Chucky when they should have at Fuego this could have been prevented. And Will is right, they will just work Travis' injuries into a storyline on the soap. I know they've done that with other actors.
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Yeah, but it is kind of like when you are getting a hand job.... you've already cum, but he keeps stroking and even though there is something kind of painful about it, you don't really want him to stop either.
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Interesting that Chucky is so easily brushed off. He wasn't just a stalker, lurking in the shadows, he actually broke into Travis's apartment and was a serious physical threat? Where was Mr. Kung Fu bodyguard?
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Wait? Is Chucky the stalker? I was going to say I was disappointed the snakes didn't all bite the director, but I think he is more poisonous than them. I hope Brad finds a way to dismiss him from Palisades. Thanks Mark for the bonus chapter!
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I loved the interviewer in the suit from the 1930s and the hat to boot.
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Meanwhile, in news from Bondi.....
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I think Jake is too smart to dirty his hands. Not wishing for his death, just a very painful reminder to not be a douche and removing him from a position of power.
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LA is a dangerous place.
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I am old enough to remember "AOL inches". Guys added an inch or two and sent you a picture at least ten years old. The advent of enough speed for live cam to cam sure ruined some older pervs game.
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Oh fornicate you Mark Arbour and your damn fornicating cliff hanger! 🤣🤣🤣 Thanks for the on time chapter I do appreciate all that goes into making that happen. This Finn seems like a nice guy. I still want Will to bump into Allister, I am surprised he hasn't already.
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I am sure the ninja protector is a licensed professional and he wouldn't be willing to risk his business. He might know some less scrupulous operators, but I got a very professional vibe from him.
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Garrett Hedlund looks okay to me.
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Garret Hedlund? I thought he said Max Headroom. I thought Will was supposed to be a 6'2", 180 pound chiseled stud?
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Cool chapter, lots going on. Thanks Mark for another chapter and cranking them out like you are, I know how busy your life can be. Sexually aggressive douche bags seems to be a current, recurring theme. One of the things I did at USC helping with their chapter of my fraternity was to bring in an LA ADA to talk about date rape, sexual assault and the ever changing standards. What used to be the norm (getting chicks drunk then hooking up when they were in a morally relaxed mood) is now grounds for charges. Basically by the time the ADA gets done with his horror stories I am sure the poor pledges won't be able to get hard for a month. Mr. Musclehead is on a collision course with the long arm of the law or the short arm of the university board of conduct. Tesla is an interesting stock. It was flat for 15 years before it took off. You could have bought it in Nov 2019 and still made a fortune, not like the original investors, but still a 20 fold return. I wonder if Weinberg will know what hit him? We are still way before the #metoo era so he probably won't face any legal or civil actions. I think on general principle I'd have someone break his kneecaps a year or so after he is gone. As to 2004....
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Halloween and Travis’s Horror
PrivateTim commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Halloween and Travis’s Horror
A very astute speculation that makes a lot of sense.- 32 comments
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Halloween and Travis’s Horror
PrivateTim commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Halloween and Travis’s Horror
“I love you so much,” he said, his voice cracking with emotion. “I love you just as much as you love me,” I replied. OMG, what is this the Hallmark Freakin' Channel? Gag me with a spoon! 🤣 Thanks Mark for another great chapter, right on time and drama heating up. I don't get Jeremy being rude to Kenji. My reaction to people like Kenji is to ignore them, which is much worse than insulting them. Insulting them says, 'hey I see you'. Ignoring them makes them cease to exist. Slowly, but surely, the onion that is Travis is being peeled one layer at a time. I hope Will will stay backed off and let Travis decide when and how to deal with his emotions. Two chapters in a row I haven't hated Will. Stop it Arbour. Let Will be Will; the self important, indulged little douche he is deep down. 😁- 32 comments
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Does anyone know how to keep your foot from tapping?
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The Countess von Lieven
PrivateTim commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in The Countess von Lieven
Thank you Mark for a wonderful chapter. This really needs to be a PBS series. Maybe Granger's son will wind up in England somehow. Or great-grandson at Harvard.- 32 comments
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This isn't a swimming with the fishies kind of thing, this is worse..... public humiliation, a career destroyed, maybe Stef buys his mortgage and forecloses. There are worse things than death, especially for someone who craves power, control and attention.
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Compared to half the chapters in Black Widow and 9-11?
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Oh man, I see someone with broken kneecaps in the near future. If I was Will (who I actually did not hate this chapter) I'd excuse myself and call Stef and get the ball rolling on ruining this dude. Thanks Mark for the chapter and some legit drama. Enjoy the islands man. And when they mention jerk chicken, it does NOT mean.....
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Stefan Schools the Class
PrivateTim commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Stefan Schools the Class
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Stefan Schools the Class
PrivateTim commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Stefan Schools the Class
Well? 🍿
