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  1. Caedus

    Picket Fences

    "Fuck picket fences, I thought as I fell asleep. A picket fence can’t keep me warm at night." Had a good laugh at this. It's hard to balance that contradiction of accepting everyone, but then actually having to accept what that means in reality. Even though the Cadet comes off as a douche, he's still an interesting character to see Corbin try to deal with. People are all their contradictions, which definitely applies to Corbin. As he hazards through his relationship with Pete, it'll be interesting to see how those contradictions play out.
  2. Happy Birthday, Anya, hope you've been well.
  3. Will definitely check out that interview. Hope your doing well, stranger.
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    Chapter 10

    Is it bad that I want you to have Cam "experimenting" with Max and/or Sam in future chapters?
  5. I love French House, especially Madeon.. EDIT:
  6. Morals aside, this story is set in the early days of the Internet, so while in Stef's day he could get away doing stuff like this in relative obscurity, Will risks this coming back to bite him in the ass when he's older, especially since he comes from such a prominent family. I guess he's fine if he doesn't end up in a high profile career.
  7. So I guess this is Norway's Oklahoma City. My condolences to the victims' families,!this is terrible news.
  8. Your so good at eliciting such strong feelings from your readers, earlier reviews are a good example of that. I feel...conflicted. On one hand I kinda feel bad that everything seems to be going wrong and Cooper' now finds out his fantasy of life with Cooper was an illusion. On the other hand.. As much as I tried not to, I loath Cooper and Chase, but I dislike Cooper because I don't respect his choices her at all. So there was a little bit (read-BIG) sense of satisfaction when he found those divorce papers. I I did feel bad when he got punched, he should of beat the &^%! out of Chase imo. Like others have said, it all seemed so good to be true so I'm pretty satisfied with this, though I did not see a marriage coming, though perhaps if Chase is such a star, the marriage may have been public knowledge. Anyways, I loved this chapter, the ending is the sweetest part. Your writing style is good because in your own way, through humor and wit, anger, bitterness, the whole spectrum, you reel us in to have fun with our emotions. Keep it up! I'm not sure where this is going and that's great! I don't care who Cooper ends up with, but I'm definitely gonna enjoy the ride as we figure that out.
  9. I haven't handled the Eee Pad myself but I've read some good reviews about it. If your considering tablets, take a look at the new 10.1 inch Samsung Galaxy Tab as well. Here are some good reviews I found for tablets in the market right now: ASUS Eee Pad Transformer Reviews: http://www.anandtech.com/show/4277/asus-eee-pad-transformer-review http://thisismynext.com/2011/05/12/asus-eee-pad-transformer-tf101-review/ Samsung Galaxy 10.1 Reviews: http://www.anandtech.com/show/4445/samsung-galaxy-tab-101-review http://thisismynext.com/2011/06/15/samsung-galaxy-tab-10-1-review/ The keyboard dock would definitely work for writing, but that depends on the type of word processing software they offered. Hope this helps!
  10. Caedus

    Picture Perfect

    I love how ya'll are assuming that Eric is squeaky clean being so close to Tori...Logan definitely left himself vulnerable, especially if Tori calls it by showing Eric the photos. Anyways, good chapter! I enjoy how you put so much with and sarcasm in to your MCs, but I'm even more excited for the dark humor vibe I'm getting off this story. So far you don't seem to use that many of the usual trope in HS fiction, so I can't wait to read what else you have for us. You seem so....flexible with the genres you explore with you explore so keep it up!
  11. Maybe with humanity in general you may be feeling detached and numb right now, which is understandable given what you've gone through. But aren't their still people in your personal life that would still affect you? Does this numbness bleed over and negatively effect other aspects of your personal life?
  12. Caedus

    Chapter 9

    Maybe because it's been awhile, or perhaps you've just conveyed the conflicting feelings of Sam and Max's royally messed up head really well, perhaps so well that I'm a little confused about where these two stand with each other. I always thought the issue was Sam being ignorant of what type of relationship he "really" had with Max because he never shifted his model beyond societal norms. Now I'm not sure what to think. Max's feelings always seemed unhealthy to me, but now ..maybe I need to re-read the rest of the story. Anyways, an overall good chapter, gives me a lot to think about. Maybe their both wrong? P.S. More Cam as a catalyst for Sam and Max.
  13. Caedus

    Prologue

    I thought you were going to give us a look at The List from Spencer's perspective, but I like this story so far. It makes some of the mundane and and depressing things associated with being middle aged and makes it entertaining and funny...and still a bit depressing. Cooper's situation isn't all that unexpected, but he's always been a fun POV, so I'm excited to see what you have in story for us as his world starts to slowly unravel.
  14. heh I guess now's the time to be rereading all the books huh? I hope they were able to make it look good in 3D.
  15. I'm confused... Wouldn't arranged gay marriages be against the traditions and values that come with arranged marriages in other cultures?
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